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May 09, 2023
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Hi! Your story seems poetic and the art is nice !
I think you would benefit from longer updates because it would be easier to follow the story. Have you considered posting longer episodes less often? Obviously the choice is yours, if it's more confortable for you with shorter updates keep it like that :)
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