Chapter 1 Page 5
Apr 10, 2017
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Compared to the new version
https://tapastic.com/episode/279479
and
https://tapastic.com/episode/279496
Another page that should have been seperated. You'll find a lot of those in this in general. Also I had a joke in there in panels 3 and 4, but I don't feel like it was that well executed. Basically the joke was that Lubo inadvertantly sounded like he was agreeing that Auda couldn't do anything. Also apperntly I had put sundials in Lubo's town. I should establish that those are still a thing.
Text in case you can't read:
Auda: I'm sick and tired of these jerks coming out at night, stealing and vandelizing and attacking!
Lubo: (Not so cute right now.)
Auda: I wish there was something I can do. But I'm just a 13-year-old girl.
Lubo: Yeah. (Poor Auda.)
Auda: What d'ya mean "Yeah"?
Lubo: N-nothing!
Lubo: Say! What time is it?
Auda: Oh. I'd say it's about...
Auda: 3:30.
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