Wow! This is a great start to a comic book! I love the world, and I am eager to explorer it as it evolves. Love every part of the Lore! I do have a little petty criticism, though. Your typography is really hard to read! It's too small, too convoluted and here and there it seems to be squished in at places. Maybe you could just have text panels instead?
Very much looking forward to the next Chapter!
Best regards,
Josef
In a world where half the population now has super powers and are known as "alternates," the story focuses on Farcaster, a mid-grade alternate forced to take dangerous jobs like bail bond bounty hunter, relying on his ability to reproduce guns and ammo he previously absorbed to give him an advantage over the criminals he has to fight in everyday life.
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