The art could be better, and so could the coloring. The line art is slightly dated in comparison to my current style (imo at least), and i'm just bad at coloring.
But this is part one for comic one! I'll likely add to this in little parts, with multiple pages per part. If you do like it, even a little bit, please leave a like or maybe comment some constructive criticism. I'm always down to improve, just need an idea on what to focus on first.
Just some kids being heroes in a world where no one else wants to.
Art is still amatuer, but I believe I'm improving! This will be the "Pilot" I guess, for my comic. I appreciate any and all criticism, as well as all who read and like this amateur comic!
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