I love your style of penciling. Your character looks unique. I also love the diamond shape layout. Does it have a function? Nice idea too. Your narrator sounds like a comiccreator trying to explain a concept... like him or herself. Or a person from the street with knowledge of the universe. If that's your intention, then it's fine. But think about it.
The world with number 26 in The Society of the Hundred Worlds has also another name. The Blue Desert. The Life itself on this planet completely depends on the Sources of Magic. It could be anything. A tree, a stone, a lake, some random stuff. And sometimes, but very rare, the Source of Magic could be a person.
Erin is such a person. She's a precious treasure of this world. That's why the Sources are guarded. By people and by Magic Itself. Erin has a Guardian from the Other Side. But who is he? Where did he come from? Let's see...
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