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Jan 08, 2017
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I love your style of penciling. Your character looks unique. I also love the diamond shape layout. Does it have a function? Nice idea too. Your narrator sounds like a comiccreator trying to explain a concept... like him or herself. Or a person from the street with knowledge of the universe. If that's your intention, then it's fine. But think about it.
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