Chapter 1
Jun 02, 2021
Creator
We are an artist duo, Nana & Mitsue.
Follow our Twitter: https://twitter.com/nanamiscifi
Or join our Discord: https://discord.gg/r5MNpgGHpB
Top comment
I like what I see so far. The story seems interesting enough. At first, I thought it might start out like a battle royale setting, but in that case, it would be of no use for anyone to go to the psychiatrist after the competition. I actually don't find it too hard to read so far, I had expected worse after you mentioned that. The character boxes are fine as well, but I'd suggest creating a tableau or glossary or something like that. That way reader could look up information faster between the chapters as there is a lot of information giving about numerous persons all at once. I probably didn't memorize half of it in the first read.
Recommendation for you
Recommendation
Long Exposure
LGBTQ+ 2.3m likes
Recommendation
Out of the Blue
Romance 2.4m likes
Recommendation
Ghost Lights
LGBTQ+ 728.2k likes
Recommendation
Copper eyes
BL 908.5k likes
Recommendation
Humor me
Slice of life 2.8m likes
Recommendation
Do You Even Witch
BL 4.5m likes
Feeling lucky
Random series you may like
1.1k views106 subscribers
Comments (12)
See all