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Aug 11, 2019
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Ms. Thief's not having whatever Alex is dishing out!
(It might not be super clear, but the 2nd row reads right to left, tried some experimental paneling here lol. Just follow the angles \o/)
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Those panels are a tough one. I read it left to right at first but was also like "Is this supposed to go the other way?"
I have a couple of suggestions, if that's okay. Part of the confusion was the "I" word bubble because it brought my eye back over to the left side of the page after reading the first line. It might actually work better on the right side.
Another idea is having some sort of connection between the last panel on the top row and the first panel on the second row. For example, the pink swoosh could have been carried over into it somehow so the reader's eye would be forced to go to that panel.
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