EP. 1 First mission
Feb 20, 2019
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Reboot with diffrent art chapter 1, let me know what you think :)
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Oh, I'm just loving it! Love how baby girl listens to her mom, so exciting. Love how our young guy leaps out of bed for his first job and the superb lighting job you do. You have such enjoyable characters. The father is so life like! Here's some normal editing stuff.
Spelling: (who's time "where" up) needs to be were.
Grammar: (They worked together to keep peace "to" the afterlife.) change to in.
Keep up this wonderful work. It's so enjoyable and has fantastic artwork!
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