nice prologue tho one thing to say since this is script type font being used for the text.. it's kind of hard to read :x tho the style fits for the story. It may be better to try out a different font that doesn't have much curls. other than that, I look forward to what you have in store for this webcomic :>
Hadi’s sister recently passed while giving birth to her daughter, Ashia, who isn’t entirely human. So, Hadi begins his journey to cross the magical boarder into Diwatia and find Ashia’s royal father.
Once past the boarder it is only with the help of a sympathetic Sirenian Commander that Hadi can hope to continue his voyage. Unaware that the Commander, Ghaleon, is smitten with him, the two seek passage across many lands. Along the way they find their mission is much greater then simply reuniting a child with her father.