(soul stands there as other students walk past him among the groups of people passing him by a seventeen-year-old girl with fiery red hair watches him from the top of the stares of the school building a look of longing and interested in her eyes she smiles as she watches him walk up the stairs and into the school she follows behind slowly all the guys watching her as she does all felt with jalousie towards soul)

random students: I can't believe that freak has caught the red devil queens eye this is so unfair.

{hey guys soul knight here as you can see a lot of souls pain in life comes 

(soul gets to his class and sits at his desk which is obvious by all the writing on it from other students as he sits down the queen watches him from the edge of the door smiling with a lustful look in her eyes she smiles until the bell rings the sound scares her and she freaks out )

queen: omg I didn't realize what time it was I'm going to be late

(soul looks over at the redheaded beauty as she takes off. soul looks confused and then pays attention to class. eight hours pass and soul is just now getting out of school  soul walks out of the school and towards the bus as he gets to the bus the driver looks at soul and slams the door and speeds off leaving soul standing there in the school courtyard all alone soul sighs and looks around getting ready to just teleport home and explain what happened later to his mom when he got home before he could. the sound of voices came from around the corner of the school panic came over soul knowing that voice very well as the  boy thats made his life a living hell since they were kids the boy found plesure in this deed soul begins to walk away as fast as he can today wasnt a good one and the last thing he needed was to be picked on even more to even to be beaten up his golden yellow eyes flashed red with the thought it wasnt the fact that soul couldnt fight its that his mother didnt want him standing out even more then he already does so all he ever tryes to do is run but this kids smart he always knows where hes going and were hes going to be he dosnt know that soul has powers but he able to perdicted his move ments . so soul rounds a corner and and is met with two older get that grave him and hold him in place a brown hair boy walks around the corner with a huge smile on his face along with missing two teeth in his mouth)

Andy: hello freak its been awhile it i was starting to think that you trying to avoid me .

soul:what?... me avoid you andy were like best friends why  would i do that 

( a look of anger comes over andys face as he draws back and slaps soul as hard as he can andy pulls his hand back blowing on it his hand was pure red)

andy: god freak what are you made out of metal 

( a slite smile come over souls face at the remark this made andy see red )

andy: alright boy this freak thinks hes better then us so lets show him how wrong he is.

(all at once all the boy jump on soul and start hitting him over and over till souls face was nothing more then a brused and bloody mess they all step back each one spiting on him as the walk away)

andy:see you tommorow freak 

(as they walk away a blade of grass rapes around his arm as it does he begins to heal he lets out along sighs as gets up brushing him self off spitting out the blood he had in his mouth were the blood lands the grass grows abit taller when he does he graves his bag and begins to walk home every person he walks past on the street giving him dirty lookd and talks behind his back soul keeps his head down his eyes shifting to red and back to yellow anger growing in side him driving him to the closer and closer to snaping he gets to one part on his walk where hes just surrounded by woods as he walks a large truck rides by hitting a puddle and soaking soul in muddy water he snaps his eyes go red and a flat circal of energy form his hand he throws it taking down 20 trees  each one smoke from where it was cut out he disappers and reappers in his bed and passes out.)   

{this still need to be edited so this is not complete