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Coma Keeper

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Nov 02, 2018

Phillip Baggio sat at his comatose mother's side. Hands clasped. Nervous leg movement. Anxiously watching the clock.

His wife thought he was crazy to believe what his mother's home nursing staff had told him...

Ten minutes after she passed out—while I was on the phone with emergency—she spoke, saying... "If Phillip Baggio wants his mother to wake, he must be alone with her at 10pm."

10:00pm

Phillip Baggio, I have placed your mother in a coma.
Who are you?!

Lisa was unable to hear his question. The Coma Keeper's capability for communication was one-way.

You are going to receive instructions. You may want to write them down so you should now fetch something to write with.

Phillip hurriedly grabbed the pen he carried with him but had no paper so in a rush decided to write on his mother's bed sheets.

When I have finished issuing your instructions, I will wake your mother. But be warned this will only be temporary if you do not follow my instructions. If you fail me, your mother will return to the coma... and others will join her.

After this ominous warning Lisa gave Phillip Baggio his instructions. Then his mother miraculously awoke as promised. He shed tears of joy.

Also tears of powerless fear.

The source of his instructions was a 5th grade girl but it might as well have been God from his standpoint.

Over the following week, Phillip Baggio—in his role as Event Coordinator for Saint Paul's Golf—rushed together a Youth Celebrity Golf Tournament.
Inviting PGA youth golfers, youth celebrities from tv and social media, children of celebrities, children of politicians.

You know exactly where this is going.

The purpose of this golf tournament was for Phillip Baggio to steal various worn-or-used items from the participants.
These items were individually bagged and labeled.
He brought those items in a box to a secluded location where he dropped them off and left as instructed.

Still not without some courage, Phillip Baggio attempted to keep watch of the location from his vehicle to see who would come to pick up the box.

When he woke up after passing out for twenty minutes, the box was gone.

Lisa opened the box in her closet. She dug through to find the one participant she specified Baggio must get...

Kai Madison Trump

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Lisa is too intelligent for the 5th Grade. Her parents and teachers have arranged to skip her straight to high school next year but that's still more than 6 months away... Lisa's boredom ends when she finds the Coma Keeper, a mysterious binder that has the power to make anyone comatose. Lisa vows to use the powers of the Coma Keeper to create a world utopia. As powerful people begin falling into comas, the legendary detective "Frank" is hired to investigate.
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