Chapter 11 - Page 67
Nov 02, 2018
Hi guys, it's been a while. I've been a bit insecure and have just been working on patreon the past 2 weeks.
This chapter recieved quite some deserved critique, and I totally understand it. I know I've made a mistakes with this chapter, the theme doesn't really fit in with the rest of the comic and it drags on for too long. I'm just 1 person making this comic and I make mistakes. I will learn from my mistakes and do better next time.
Meanwhile I'm not going to give up, I'll try to wrap this chapter up the best I can, and then start the last chapter which will hopefully fix my mistakes and focus on KuroXMomo again.
FloresDelMal
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Lucazu, featuring some drama in a generally lighthearted work is not a mistake, this could be a big growth opportunity for momo and Kuro, I am rooting for him here to prove them wrong and come back with the police, but even if that doesn't happen I am hoping that such a big scare will help momo to wisen up and actually communicate with the ppl that care for him before he acts, you are learning as you are doing, but you have never disappointed me, and I suppose there are many more that think like me than haters in your readership ^^
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BL comic.
Read RIGHT to LEFT.
There are bad decisions then there's horrible decisions, but to sign a contract while drunk is one of the worst you can make. Momo learned that the hard way thanks to his roommate, Kurokawa.
What will happen when the contract ends? Sometimes revenge is as sweet as love, and sometimes there's a lot behind a simple "I hate you."
Will Momo's feelings change as he learns more about his supposed enemy?
My Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/Lucazu?ty=h
Twitter: https://twitter.com/LucazuHY
Read RIGHT to LEFT.
There are bad decisions then there's horrible decisions, but to sign a contract while drunk is one of the worst you can make. Momo learned that the hard way thanks to his roommate, Kurokawa.
What will happen when the contract ends? Sometimes revenge is as sweet as love, and sometimes there's a lot behind a simple "I hate you."
Will Momo's feelings change as he learns more about his supposed enemy?
My Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/Lucazu?ty=h
Twitter: https://twitter.com/LucazuHY
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