You took too long and now it's gone.
The Measure of Your Most Devastating Stride
Nov 24, 2018
nelorzoul
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Woah—stark contrast to the previous entries! The fight descriptions have gotten way more intense and brutal given it’s supposed to be the Dad and Daughter writing them. The length of the fight descriptions is way longer than usual too, which really adds to the vibe of heightening madness that Marzipan is giving off in this episode. Makes me wonder what’s going on in the Dad’s head, given that he’s likely the one writing this scene (based on the daughter’s level of literary expertise thus far).
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You took too long and now it's gone.
- Marzipan
You took too long and now it's gone.
- Marzipan
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