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I'm A Butterfly Trapped In A Cocoon

I'm a butterfly trapped in a cocoon

I'm a butterfly trapped in a cocoon

Nov 26, 2018

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Warning suicidal thoughts and suicide read at your own discretion

I'm a girl age 16 there this boy I like he doesn't know this I wish I could let him know that I like him he in my class but I'm like a butterfly I use my colors to camouflage i'm beautiful but on the inside I feel like I'm trapped in a cocoon I wish I could show people how I feel but I feel trapped it's tragic and it's hurts more and more each day it hurts to keep these things inside but every time I try to reach out I just feel trapped wish I could tell him how I feel I wish could tell everyone how I feel it's like a stabbing pain you try to reach out but you are trapped sometimes I just get away from everything I go to the roof of my school sometimes I walk on the edge I think about what would happen if I fall would I fly could I finally break free from my cocoon well I finally got my answer I remember it was a night I couldn't sleep I walked to my school where I found myself walking on the edge of the roof I remember I stumble and I remember falling I remember thinking can I finally be free can I escape from my cocoon next thing I know everything went black I remember waking up I remember hearing my mother crying I remember standing over my body I remember the doctor telling my mother that I was never going to regain consciousness I remember thinking it's beautiful but tragic I finally escaped my cocoon

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TheBrokenGirl1227
TheBrokenGirl1227

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Thank you for reading this is the first thing I ever wrote at the time I was 14 and I was feeling a lot of things at that time that I didn't understand and because of that this short story came to be

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MiraNo!
MiraNo!

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I really hope you are at a better place now. I wish you all the best and all the love. You deserve it ❤️
If you need someone to talk you can write me if you want to. As someone who went through depression and suicidal thoughts myself I might be able to understand.
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Now some constructive criticism, I hope that's okay for you. I think your story might be easier to read if you would place dots at the end of every sentence. If you did it in an artistic sense ignore what I wrote.

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