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The Castle on the Edge of Night

The Door left Ajar

The Door left Ajar

Dec 12, 2018

Dear child, lost and alone,
Where do you come from?
Why do you roam?

No, no, no, no! The word resounded in my head as I sprinted down the street. My little brown boots echoed off cold grey buildings as they pounded on the cobblestone floor. They felt as though they would tear with how fast I was running, but I could not care about that. Not now. I had to return home. I had to return before the darkness crept in.

Before the Night King came.

I ran. Faster than I thought I could. Faster than I ever had. My heart was pumping hard. My breath was ragged. I struggled to pull cold air into my lungs. My dress fluttered and clammed up around me, drenched in sweat and snow. I needed to get home. I needed to be with my mother. I needed to be there before the king came. I needed to shut the door on the rest of the world. I needed to hide.

I had never been late before. I was always home before the darkness hit the town. But I had never met another person awake. He had such nice hair and interesting eyes. Who was he? I wished to see him again and yet hated that I did meet him. Why did he run? Why did I run after him? I should have known it was nearly time to go home. I should have known.

Why didn’t I check the time?

In the distance, I heard the sound of hooves. The sound bounced off the walls, up through the street. They were coming. They were coming up this path. They would be here soon.

I hurled myself into the closest alleyway and flattened myself against the icy wall. I shivered and covered my mouth, attempting to stifle a shocked scream. I focused on being quiet. I focused on being nothing. I held my breath.

Three figures on fine big black horses thundered past. They went too fast for me to see much, but I could tell though, that the man riding at the very back was the king.

He was clothed in a fine cloak of black with fine shining silver dots, as though the stars were sewn into them. It was bright and spectacular. I had never been so close to him before. The cloak fluttered behind him, as though he was dragging the night sky through the street. The crown on his head was a radiant silver white. It shone like it was made out of the moon.

I waited until they were out of earshot and then then let go of the breath I was holding. I gulped air in with frightened gulps. Then I tipped toed out of the alleyway to check if it was all clear. My heart was still pounding. I wondered if it would burst through my chest. It was so loud. Did they not hear it as well?

Luckily there was no one around. I raced down the street, darting into alleyways ever so often, pausing there for a while, to make sure that they were not around. Sometimes I could hear hooves. When I did I hid for longer, praying that they would not find me.

I breathed in relief when I saw the alleyway that lead to my home.

I felt so relieved, until I saw that the door to my house was ajar.

I was mortified.

Did I not close the door? Did I forget? How could I have forgotten to do something so simple! But, I saw the king… didn’t I? He was far from here? Wasn’t he?

With a panicked heart, I gently pushed the door open and looked into the house. Then I screamed.

Standing by the fire place with my mother in his arms was a tall man.

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Edit: Chapter has been edited, and also song added.
Song also on youtube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RwaAsCX3kCE

Oho! Who could that be?

Thank you for reading, and for subscribing! You guys are awesome! <3 God bless, have a great day!

#nov18writerscamp #doors #Fantasy #mystery #roxanne #mother #stranger #romance

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Gabriella Balagna
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Gotta say, love how the beginning always starts with poetry.

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