yo- just some constructive criticism here; i really likr your comic and the storyline has a lot of potential! but sometimes i fee like the art (specifically the shading and anatomy) can be a bit distracting- i don’t mean any disrespect by this, but i think it would help your art a lot if you were to practice or study more anatomy, and look into cell shading rather than using an airbrush. another thing i noticed is that for the shading/highlights you use a black and white, i would recommend using a darker/lighter colour of the thing you’re shading! it helps a lot :)
At first, the only problem Alex has with the gay couple living next door is that they can be a bit loud during sex. But soon, he begins to suspect that it's not just love or attraction that keeps the two together. The more he gets to know his neighbor Josh, the less he's able to ignore the danger that Josh may be in.
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