Gone like the wind
But stayed like ashes
Ready to run
But frozen
Like a flower,
Dying from the change of season
Some things disappear
But I just wither
Wither
Apr 20, 2019
Gone like the wind
But stayed like ashes
Ready to run
But frozen
Like a flower,
Dying from the change of season
Some things disappear
But I just wither
Creator
Hey, what's up? I finished writing this poem late last night, so I want to know if it's actually good, or if that was just my brain malfunctioning—drop some feedback in the comments! Thank you all for reading!
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I'm having trouble understanding these poems because they dont have a purpose(meaning, topic, main idea) if you get me. It's like just a bunch of rhyming metaphors that lead to no where
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