I like this so far. There's a good sense of pacing to the actions. If I can make one critique though, it's that they're too wordy. You don't have to describe what's happening when the audience can see it in the art. Other than that, keep it up!
They say that all it takes is three seconds to become a legend in the wrestling world. That's certainly the hope of rookie Leilana Ito, as she defies her father's wishes to become a wrestler.
But when she crosses path with veteran heel Dana Harding, her life and her quest to be the best will change forever.
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