Chapter 1 Page 7
May 31, 2019
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The match begins in earnest, and it isn't as one-sided as Dana would like.
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I like this so far. There's a good sense of pacing to the actions. If I can make one critique though, it's that they're too wordy. You don't have to describe what's happening when the audience can see it in the art. Other than that, keep it up!
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