THIS IS BEING RE-WRITTEN! i hate how this started and how its going. im will start back on it again im almost done with the first chapter and i hope you all understand. and by all i mean like two people.but for those who do care here is a sneak peak.

"Whatever is beyond the forest is what the others have deemed 'the bad lands'. Through the past seven and a half years of my travels, it's an appropriate title. Constant wars and fights, bandits at every turn like shadows, and constant bloodshed. But luckily it isn't half as bad as it was years ago; before this system of leader ship was created; years ago kingdoms like Altique and Padoram were on the brink of war, that's when the high commission had decided to bring about a new kind of monarchy. This kind of governing was based on the individuals who ruled each region. Unfortunately, these ideas and concepts were twisted and molded into something sick. The Palncons have a monarchy with a demented twisted king. The region of Altique doesn't have kings or queens; instead each village has representatives deemed lords. The Moscoans have a group called the Jury, which is almost like the high commission. Then the region of Padoram, it's probably the most corrupt one of them all."