Chapter 2: Setting Sail
Oct 24, 2019
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so far I like the world you have created and you have begun to lay out some interesting plot lines. You do change point of view and voice which can get confusing and distracting, I think the more you write the more that will resolve easily. I look forward to reading your story and watching you evolve as a writer. I really admire everyone who shares their work here, it’s so brave and generous of you.
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