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Underground Pizza Delivery

Taking a break. I need your help!

Taking a break. I need your help!

Dec 12, 2019

Hey guys!

Thanks for taking time to read my little story so far. To be honest, when I started this project, I didn't think I'd really commit to it, but now here I am, 3 chapters in, and having more fun writing than ever before.

When I first started creating the world of Underground Pizza Delivery, my vision was for it to be a graphic novel or ongoing comic book series, but as many of you know, paying a team of artists to make a comic book isn't cheap, so instead I decided to take a crack at novel writing.

While I'm loving the process so far, many of you have probably already noticed, I have no idea what I'm doing! I have zero experience writing a novel, and frankly, I don't think I'm very good at it (yet!).

As I contemplated what to do about my lack of writing ability, I realized I had only had two real options; A) give up on the story altogether, or B) work my butt off and try to get good. I've decided on the latter.

My goal is to tell the story I've always wanted to tell, to the best of my ability, but in order to do that, I may need to slow down on the uploading. I've already gone over my first thee chapters, and made numerous edits to what I've already posted. Hopefully they made the book a little more readable!

Contrary to the title of this post, I'm not actually taking a break from writing, as much as I am simply slowing down the rate at which I'm posting, in order to give time for my beta readers to give me feedback and make sure each chapter posted is a quality read.

In the meantime, what I'd love for you guys to do is this. While I work on improving my craft and fleshing out the outline for this book, it would mean a lot if you guys could re-read my first three chapters, and give me some honest constructive criticism on what I'm doing wrong, and how I can make it better.

Hopefully, I'll be able to get chapter 4 out sometime next week, and it will be decent. Until then, I look forward to hearing from you all!

Sincerely,

Joemel D.

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Joemel D.

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When a group of rambunctious high school freshmen go on an after-school adventure to explore the mysterious and forbidden Prokopian underground, they are captured by a secret militia of underground settlers they never knew existed. In exchange for freedom, our heroes Dennis, Vance, Ricky, and Paul offer to smuggle in everyone's favorite Italian delicacy from their local pizza shop, but in order to do this, they have to survive the ever growing threat of monsters, zombies, the king's guards, and worse of all, their parents.
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Taking a break. I need your help!

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