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FNaF: Before Dark

23 hours before the incident.

23 hours before the incident.

Feb 07, 2020

"Huh," Rory chuckled. "Looks like it was nothing."

The animatronics lied on the floor, motionless, dead, but somehow left Sue and Rory creeped out.

"Come on, let's keep going." Sue said quickly.

"Hold on, I hear something" Rory looked up as if he was tuning his ears.

There was silence. Not a sound. Not until Sue heard it too.

"Wait, I think I hear i-"

"Sshh!" Rory hissed.

There it was. Where was it coming from? It was faint and seemed like it was coming from another room.

"I think it's a music box..." Rory whispered.

"Shouldn't it be coming from the dining area?" Sue questioned.

"Yeah, but it sounds like it isn't. Like, I dunno, the sound's coming from elsewhere."

"This is too creepy, can't we just leave!?" Sue begged.

"Yeah, you're right." Rory agreed.

And with that, he turned off the lights and slowly closed the door, trying not to make a lot of sound. As Sue and Rory did a deep sigh, they walked down the hallway and in front of the main stage. The feeling of unease left.

"Well look who it is, Freddy Fazbear!" Rory said energized.

"Uh-huh." Sue mumbled.

"What? You don't like him?"

"No, he's not bad. I just like Bonnie better, he's my favourite." Sue explained.

"Oh! That reminds me! We have that birthday party tomorrow! And we get to use the springlock suits! Isn't that cool!?" Rory enthusiastically said.

"Yeah, it's pretty cool.But, I'm not too sure. They seem kinda...I dunno...dangerous?."

"Oh come on, I can use the Freddy one and you can use the Bonnie one!" Rory replied.

"I guess..." Sue said.

"Tomorrow's going to be awesome! Anyway, it's getting pretty late."

Rory checked his watch.

"We went an hour past our shift. It's 11:00 pm."

"At least no-one will know, they don't have a night guard or anything." Sue said as she smirked.

"Not yet at least." Rory pointed out.

Rory and Sue started to walk out of the building. They passed through the reception desk and arrived at the entrance. Sue opened the door to the sounds of crickets outside.

Click!

Rory closed and locked the door to make sure no intruders entered.

"Well, I'll see you tomorrow Sue." Rory said.

"Yep, see you tomorrow." Sue replied.

Ending their conversation, they walked to their cars and drove off to their own homes. Tomorrow was going to be a big day.

End of Episode 2

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A very polished story! In the second line, change it to "...but they somehow...". In the fourth line, make sure to add a comma before the closing quotation marks. I'm unsure what "tuning" someone's ears means. If they're referring to a specific music box they know, say "it's the music box...". Remove the ! from "!?" as it makes the piece less refine. Change it to "The feeling of unease left their bodies." Change all the full-stops ending dialogue that isn't followed by something else (e.g "Sue explained.) to commas. Why does Sue seem so into using the springlock suits, when she seems like the more reserved one? Overall, very polished and foreboding. I'm very expectant!

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