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The mafia's mate

Chapter 3

Chapter 3

Apr 03, 2020

After I finally calmed down I could think calmly again, this madman act was so out of character for me I swear It was only happening because my phone is gone like I need it not only cause I'm an addict but mainly because there is a lot of import shit in there ok?

It's not the fear of someone looking through it cause man, I wanna see who have the guts to challenge me and try to go through the security system I programmed myself, like boy fight me if you have the guts, it's more like a fear of having to do it all over again you know? Like I saved so much on that phone that I don’t really want to lose it.

Anyway, I start looking like for the million time around just that this time I was calm enough to actually judge the situation.

Ok so there was the king-size bed in the middle of the room where I was sleeping before, next to it there was a bedside table with two locked drawers, a big carpet a locked window with a view to a fucking huge garden and a smaller door leading to the bathroom, that trust me was emptier than this room.

Fucking bullshit at least lock me with something to do!

Then I looked again at my clothes I was wearing a bottom-up long white shirt tucked into a black with red flowers dress pants and a dress shoe, in short, I was choking to death, where is my favorite crop top give it back!

Oh and like a shit tone of accessories from neckless to earing to rings like man, I look like a fucking rich brat.

But man it's useless there is nothing in here!!! Oh shit, wait I think I hear a noise outside the door.

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Your writing is good but needs a bit of improvement, as a writer myself I can understand the struggle. It's flows and transitions are a bit funky. Sometimes the sudden talking to the reader feel little out of place, but only in the sense of it being a little sudden. I think the words could have a bit better of a flow but the writing style is over all good. It just needs a bit of fine tuning. I don't mean to sound rude or like an opinionated snob who thinks they know more and are better, especially as I'm not a very good writer but as someone who aspires to be an author I thought you might want to know were you can improve a bit so that you can become a better writer. I know I am always looking for every flaw in my writing to help improve. I apologize if this comes off as offensive as I only wanted to help (which can still be offensive and I apologize for that as well).

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Nick one day just woke up locked in a room he doesn't recognize, and for a boy who had to fend for himself for the past 5 years after getting involved in some shady underworld business, it's definitely not a good sign. Add his rude cheeky personality to the case and you get a mess.
Derek is the alpha of his pack, who is also the head of the mafia his pack runes, he is known for his coldness and merciless behavior so what would he do if one day a boy that has been captured by him turned out to be his mate and to top it up it doesn't seem like the boy is interested in obeying him at all?
Well, let's try to give fate our beliefs in fixing that mess it created.

btw, I know it looks like a billion chapters but they are super short so its not that bad, I promise:)
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