Distractions
May 05, 2020
This comics been in my WIP files for a while and I'm still not 100% on it. Any suggestions on how to make it better? Facial expressions? Pacing? Would love to hear from the knowledgable Tapas community :)
Bee
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I might leave out the “kinda” at the end. I find that the flow of the comic feels better if you only have one speech bubble per person per panel.
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