So....would you guys be super mad if unposted T.A.P and possibly re do the whole story? Im just not super happy with where it's at and I'll probably make some drastic changes but keep the main plot the same. Please leave your opinions in the comments
It's hard to continue with work you're unhappy with. I like where you are so far but if your vision has changed, it's best to start again. In the end, you have to create a project that you're proud of. You invest a lot of time crafting your characters, plot, story flow and tone. Do what you have to. I'm grateful that you think enough of us to include us in your process. You could have just dropped this story all together and told us nothing 🤷🏿♀️
Karma always tried to stay hidden at school, he kept good grades, he didn't hang out with his friends and he never stood out. At home was an entirely different story his parents and siblings loved him, he talked frequently and everyone knew him.
Dante, on the other hand, was the complete opposite he stood out at school for better or for worse, he had average grades, a large group of friends, and everything he could wish for, that is until he got home. when he was home he was alone his father is the only one he had and he worked long shifts on multiple jobs so Dante only saw him if he was lucky, he was quiet and melancholy only cleaning the apartment when needed.
One chance meeting (and one wimpy councilor) brought these two men together flinging them into the rest of their lives.
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