Intriguing world creation story and pantheon. Love the artwork! The story beats are solid, and well represented in the images. If I had 2 comments it would be 1) tone down the italicized text a little, it's slightly difficult to read, and pulls me out of the story, and 2) I feel that the motion-blur tracing could use a little improvement. It's sometimes difficult to tell the direction of the action.
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