Can you make a webnovel on a facebook post?

Dialogue has started to appear. The only thing lacking is content in delivering lines. Still some lines are redundant. I noticed it upon writing these chapters.

Chapter 0.16 - The story continues

With the characters going back to their usual routine. Aka battle-repair-eat-cleanup and battle again. The number of times the food and rations being refreshed are at every interval of the minute. It is thank to other characters swiftly gathering resources and growing plants for ingredients to cook.

The characters hasn't been accustomed to the various locations in this realm. So we're having a tour right now. With an announcement from the speaker system (it is installed at various places where the characters are), the following message came out as "Everyone, please gather at the large door leading outside the realm."

With this declaration, the ground where I stand shook at the stampede of people gathering at the door. Others fly and float, using their ability to instantly teleport via dimensional means and mechas and vehicular transformers too, approach with their heavy duty plate armor that weighs a ton the ground shook with each step.

The scientist that can enter dimensional portals introduced himself along with the other managers of this realm.

"I am the scientist that can create dimensional portals, Cherian Sally" wearing a lab coat, glasses in the frame color of dark brown, a blue tie and holding a clipboard to keep notes of. His assistant is a floating robot.

Following him is the individual that has a parasol, "Hello hello, I am the lady with a parasol, I love just about everything in this realm. Oh, my name is Marriane by the way" she wears a dress in black and hints of violet, wearing gloves in a violet dark shade, holding on her parasol and a chubby pig as a pet beside her.

"Lun" he said stating his name in a short manner. The character wearing a hunter hat and scarf as black as the night, his aura in the likeness of an assassin, holding a blue sniper rifle and a yellow pistol, his companion fox ghost greets as well. "Speak more than three lines instead of one" the fox ghost said. He ignored the companion's statement and turned his gaze to the next.

"Heya, Harukima here with my yokai katana. I will change the world into a potato world". Her declaration of loving potatoes surfaced on her introduction. She wears a yellow scarf, a headphone with glasses. She holds her sheathed katana and a tonfa. Her eccentric aura radiating out of her.

"May you be blessed by the goddess. I am Eve." she said with a smile. She sits on a large fox with a princess in the back, sleeping soundly. She wears a prietess robe white in color with yellow patterns and a symbol of the sun. Her staff adorned with a yellow orb at the head covered with wood. The fox introduced himself, "I am the 1000 year old fox and has lived more than my master." They share similarities with the fox ghost that accompanies Lun but the big difference is the size. The fox ghost can be measured by an arm while the 1000 year old fox is at the size of a large car.

"I am Mouse1002, it's a handle name I always use." He had his sheathed katana by the side, and gauntlets on both of his arms. He wears a white hoodie with a necktie, a headphone covering his ears. His companion is an AI holographic cat.

And now we head onto the river where boats are lined up with each group of characters entering every boat. The magician that possess many eyes with his entourage, the twins that has the ability to reverse (Reve and Ever), the android that came from the future (SMPL-01), the warrior who wields two swords (Raynex Walrite) and the character with the right eye of manifestation (Elezar Monx).

The six students followed by the 5 teachers cramming themselves in a boat. The whole clan of Clavoire; its servants and maids entered their own boat. The first group of characters along with the support group entered their individual flying vehicles and launched into the air. The antique shopkeepers with the pair of swordswomen and the pair of horned demon with the tied down chaser to stop herself from chasing him again by the side of the boat they're in. The character that can echo-locate with his two new group mates, and the past twin riding a dragon, now a single entity and the dragon beside her, the dragon in its miniature form, now this is the point where it gets confusing to read so might as well summarize.

All of the characters are in each of their boats. They rowed the boats until the end of the river with the flying vehicles following along. The river led to a wide ocean. A large sea octopus appeared eating all the boats and transforming into a submarine. There are shock expressed in the faces of the characters but it quickly fades away at the sight of the underwater scenery. The flying vehicles followed them in their underwater form. There is a tunnel gate with a small clear window. The flying vehicles went in the clear window, the clear window transforming into a slime material enveloping the plane vehicles clearing off water.

The large sea octopus entered fitting itself in the tunnel gate and opening it. In the process of ejecting out excess water, each boat laid on a railing that leads to another tunnel. The various scenery of the underwater environment pass, sea creatures swam about in the forests of seaweed. It hasn't been deeply explored yet so might as well check it out later on.

We were welcomed with the sight of mechas and vehicular transformers repaired by various workers. The group on the boat is protected by the transparent tunnel. Maintenance is done by the mechanic (Dan the Mechanic) and the individual with the strange hand (Jeff Martin) working below underground. The cave interior and various metal foundations can be seen. The circus group helps around with the workers on maintenance of the large machines.

And turning to the side, the tunnel builds up momentum to go to the surface. The railing guided the boats to a cave. The dark cave became bright as the boats come up leading them to a place. The garden with the fountain deformed into that of an outlet of the tunnel. The boats got outside with the railing stopping at the exact time the boats we're laid on the grass field.

The scientist with a raise of a hand commanded the AI robot to navigate the buggy vehicles to their place. The passengers of the boat came out and now on the buggy vehicles. The plane vehicles transforming from underwater form to their plane form. They continued to drive out from the garden and into the main house taking a U turn from their place. They reached it before long and the main house with a large and wide circle at its center, the houses at both sides.

The only thing that the characters discussing during the tour is the places and parts they've noticed in the environment. The tour ended at the door where the blacksmith and the gateway to the underground research laboratory are. It's also the place where the individual mechanic and individual with a strange hand is doing their research on the spare parts. The buggy vehicles coming to a full stop. The characters went out.

"So those are the locations you can go to in this realm. Any questions?" I asked them.

Among the crowd the princess declared. "Where's the palace?". The crowd goes silent at the question.