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Urban Wolf: On The Run

Lament

Lament

Mar 19, 2021

With a heavy heart, I took the train after packing my backpack the best I could, forfeiting what was left of the ‘family’ my real parents tried to leave behind for us. Through the window I watch, as it all fades away. I’m sure that I could think of some good memories from the past to weep about a few days ago, but now it’s just an unending blackness composed of pain, sorrows, and failure. What little good was left now has a black shadow cast over it by the impending doom that came later, and in the back of my head rattled premonitions of a better future that never was, or will be.

Because I might have killed that future.

Never did I imagine that thinking of my past would be quite this sickening, and never in my life would I have imagined actually leaving this place, let alone finding this much cold comfort in it. Yet, here I am. I take a seat, alone, one girl with a pair of swords, just another stranger in the crowd. I burned all the bridges already, but there’s one choice left: Should I acknowledge my heritage?

No. I need to leave my past behind,
all of it. Today, I’m nobody; just another ghost riding along the wind, waiting, yearning for a new haunt.

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Updated 6/14/2021 with a gentle rewrite and finally regulating the font.

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Sam V
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This is a very moody, but a very effective introduction! I think at the start I got a bit confused whether you're using the past or present tense, but I think what you were going for is "she's sitting on the train now, she was just telling us she got on it like a few hours ago". But then the "by the impending doom that came later" should probably change to "by the doom inevitably coming" or something.

I like the "rattled premonitions of a better future that never was, or will be."

"I might have killed that future" could just be a clear-cut "I killed that future." More damning. More effective.

Overall, good opening!

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The train ticket took her to Halych, the illustrious city that thrives in the daylight and hides great darkness in its shadows. It’s just her luck, then, that she ends up in an underground gang war against a drug cartel.

It’s just her luck, then, that the swordmaster can’t seem to escape the blood, the danger, and all the choices she didn’t want to have to make.

But worst of all is how—despite all her soul-searching—she can’t even escape her own shadow.

This story will contain frequent displays of graphic violence, harsh language, and touches on topics of moral ambiguity and the usage of hard drugs.

Disclaimer: Cover image is not mine.
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