Uh oh. Let's hope the date isn't a total disaster....but on other news I'm really surprised by how well you manage the themes of teenager trouble! Especially the thing with piercings, drugs, all that stuff -- it's true kids get a stigma from those things. It's teenage angst but also some serious stuff that people are uncomfortable talking about. I also like how M and Torre's relationship hasn't had anything inappropriate, it's taking things slow, and their joke while on the bleachers was some amazingly written dialogue. The banter was real and it was completely PG, which I'm really grateful for. Or maybe I've spent way too much time on Wattpad wading through badly written stuff. Anyway, I hope you keep up the work! Looking forward to reading more. -Jade
Rated T for Teen
Maybelline Turner is one of the poorest students at her exclusive magnet school. One day, she makes the mistake of borrowing a dollar from Tino Torres: the infamous football player with a nasty attitude. Now he's telling her she owes him one hundred dollars instead... And she has no idea how to get that kind of money!
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