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Kingdom of the Red Rose

Episode 4 of 62

Episode 4 of 62

Aug 09, 2021

This is an ongoing story. If it’s your first time reading the novel I suggest you start from Episode 1. If this episode is not where you last left off, then please check the Table of contents of all episodes released so far and find the last episode you read and continue from there.


Kingdom of the Red Rose
(Episode 4 of 62)
Chapter Two: Guardian Angel Nathaniel
(Part 1 of 2)

When Grim Reapers go on a mission, they are always equipped with three things, their weapon, their scroll, and their Soul-Chain.

The weapon’s purpose is threefold. First, to allow the Grim Reapers access to their mana, enabling them to perform certain abilities, such as distorting the flow of time. Second, it gives them access to Heaven’s central database and allows them to quickly obtain any information they require that will assist them to accomplish their mission. The weapon’s third use is, of course, to protect Grim Reapers and provide them with something to strike down Demons in the unlikely event they are attacked by one. Grim Reapers’ classification is collectors and escorts, not fighters, but just in case they all receive some basic training.

The weapon has a voice and a name. Both are chosen by the Grim Reaper, but at first it is a subconscious selection. Later, when Grim Reapers learn to control their mana better, they can decide to change it. This is also true when it comes to Grim Reapers’ appearances and the types of weapons they use. Their first selection is always an instinctual choice and as they progress in the ways of transformation, they can alter their looks, or their weapon, according to their preferences.

The scroll, at first glance in its original form, seems like an old piece of parchment but it is a lot more than that. Its main function is for Heaven’s Council of Twelve to pass orders and missions to all Angels and Grim Reapers. It is also used to reply back to the Council of Twelve with any requests, and for communication between Angels and Grim Reapers; a lot like texting or emailing if you prefer. As with everything else, some Grim Reapers choose to alter the scroll’s appearance according to their personal taste.

Last, but not least, is the Soul-Chain. An important, if not the most important tool for a Grim Reaper. A soul without a mortal shell can only be touched by three things; direct contact with another free soul such as an Angel, Demon, or a Grim Reaper; a weapon that is enhanced with mana; and the Soul-Chain.

Running around, trying to capture a soul with your bare hands can prove to be time-consuming and nearly impossible. Using a mana enhanced weapon runs the risk of injuring the souls, which is to be avoided at all costs according to Heaven’s rules. The Soul-Chain has a long range and is specially made and enchanted so it cannot hurt the soul but can contain it if tied around it properly.

Griffin had already dragged about twenty souls from the derailed train into the desert of Purgatory, where they awaited their final judgment. The Angels had set up a small temporary base there composed of large white tents, wooden chairs and tables, and a big cage constructed out of Soul-Chains.

Purgatory is an enormous desert with soft golden sand and countless dunes of all shapes and sizes that quickly shift around and change locations on a daily basis depending on the wind. It’s easy to get lost in Purgatory as the landscape is never the same two days in a row because of the regular sandstorms. The heat is always unbearable, and it can be dangerous for anyone who wanders around Purgatory unprepared.

Because of the unusual circumstances of this particular mission, the souls were held at the temporary base until the Grim Reapers collected them all. Then the Council of Twelve would pass out orders to escort the souls to their new destination. Everything was going according to plan and according to the Council’s information, not a single soul was lost to the Demons.

Griffin had a couple of close encounters, but the Angels always intervened in time and allowed him to collect the soul and escape. Griffin had dropped the soul he was carrying with the rest of them and was about to rush back into the mortal world when Lance crossed into Purgatory with the unconscious and badly wounded body of Dafne in his arms.

“Mana, I need mana here,” Lance flew towards the medics’ tent.

“Lance, what happened?” Griffin helped Lance place Dafne’s body on an empty table.

“Some God damned Demons figured out we used her and Nicolas to slow down time and attacked her from behind while she was releasing mana.”

“Wait, wait, they attacked her while she was responsible for slowing down time? That means …” Griffin looked around and suddenly dozens of Angels appeared into Purgatory, all severely injured.

“The train crushed some of them,” Lance grabbed a cup filled with what appeared to be water and tried to pour some down Dafne’s throat.

“Who will swap with Nicolas now?” Griffin asked in an elevated voice.

“Don’t worry. The Council of Twelve said we’ve collected most of the souls. They’re all accounted for except one. Everyone’s searching for it and They hope we will find it before--”

“They hope?” Griffin screamed, forgetting his rank, “I’m going back to help search for the soul.”

Lance grabbed Griffin’s bony arm and pulled him back. “Every Grim Reaper still able to move and wield their Soul-Chain is out there searching for the soul. The Council instructed everyone who has already crossed over to stay here and tend to the wounded.”

“Obviously not all able Grim Reapers are out there searching,” Griffin pulled his arm free and faded out of Purgatory and into the mortal world.

“Stubborn kid, he never follows orders.” Lance pulled out his scroll and a pen appeared in his hands out of thin air.

‘Your newest member has disobeyed me and the Council’s orders. He crossed into the mortal world to search for the missing soul.’

The ink was absorbed into the scroll and it turned blank. A minute later Lance’s bow vibrated and emitted a burst of green colour. He had a reply from the receiver of his message.

‘Got it, I’ll keep an eye out for him.

Please don’t report his behaviour to the Council. They can’t be sure where he was when They issued the order unless you tell Them.

I will have a long talk with Griffin when the mission is over.

Thanks for contacting me first, Lance.’

Lance crumpled the scroll and growled as he finished reading it. “I’ll never understand why everyone keeps covering for him. He probably turned out this way because of it,” he thought. Lance took a couple of deep breaths, releasing anger and regaining his composure before replying to the message.

‘As you wish, Archangel Michael. He is on your team, not mine. But I recommend you stop treating him like a child. That is probably why he has such a hard time following orders.’

Lance was surprised when his bow vibrated again. He never expected Archangel Michael to reply.

‘It is not because of how anyone treats him, Lance.

Most likely Griffin constantly disobeys rules because of what he is. And even though you do not know what that is exactly, you know better than anyone that Griffin is not like the rest of you Grim Reapers. That is why he was placed under my command. He is my responsibility, so let me worry about him.

Thanks for informing me first, friend.’

Griffin faded into the mortal world at the railway track. He saw Nicolas inside the tunnel, struggling to release mana and slow down time. Archangel Michael was at the entrance of the tunnel, pushing back and killing any Demon that tried to get to Nicolas. Out of nowhere, a Demon fell at Griffin’s feet with a spear through his head. The Demon liquefied and disappeared.

Archangel Gabriel ran up to Griffin and pulled his spear out of the ground. “Did you find the last soul?” his eyes kept searching for more demons.

“No,” Griffin replied.

“Then why in God’s name are you just standing there? Either go look for it or go back to Purgatory, there are Angels there who require medical attention.”

“I‘m just trying to figure out where the last soul is, maybe it hasn’t detached yet from its body.”

“No shit,” Gabriel launched his spear towards the tunnel. It ran through the back of a Demon and pinned him to the ground. Michael used his sword to cut the Demon’s head off.

“Do you have any idea where the last soul might be?”

“If I did then I would’ve taken it out of here myself. It’s your job to find it. Mine is to kill any Demons I see,” Gabriel pulled out his sword and started charging down the slope, going after a Demon that was sniffing around the carriages, looking for souls to steal.

“Griffin, over here,” Archangel Michael yelled from the tunnel’s entrance and Griffin ran by his side. “Listen, most of the Demons have retreated, but as you know we are missing one soul. The Angels inspected all the carriages and there isn’t a body on them that still contains a soul. But somewhere out there is a poor soul struggling to break free from its body. I need you to find it before Nicolas depletes all his mana. If time returns to normal and that soul releases it will start running, and then there is no telling who’ll get to it first.”

“Has anyone checked the carriage that is still on the railway track?” Griffin asked.

“Duck!” Michael yelled.

Griffin barely managed to bend his knees and lean backwards as Michael’s shield went over his head and struck a Demon in the chest, sending him flying out of the tunnel.

“The carriages fell down the mountain, Griffin,” Michael quickly took cover behind his shield, making sure he covered Nicolas.

“There’s one tipped over on the railway track, just before the bend. It must have broken free from the rest,” Griffin dusted his cloak.

“Ah yeah, that one’s just storage, nothing but travellers’ bags in there. Hey Griffin, what are you doing?” Michael shouted as he realized Griffin was moving away.

“I’m just going to check something out.”

“Griffin, we already checked it. You’re wasting your time!”

Griffin ignored Michael’s shouts and ran towards the single railway carriage that was still on the tracks. 


The story continues in:
Kingdom of the Red Rose
(Episode 5 of 62)
Chapter Two: Guardian Angel Nathaniel
(Part 2 of 2)

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Sam V
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Okay, so this chapter clarifies that the collected souls still ultimately receive judgement.

Again, I would've maybe re-structured the reveal of information here. Maybe starting out with the vastness of the purgatory, showing off Griffin dropping off his twentieth soul, and in the midst of showing him releasing the dragged soul, introduce the Soul-Chain, with leads into the talk of rest of the equipment.

My reasoning is that while you're introducing the equipment, the reader is given a moment to pause and, in the background, process the information on the Purgatory. It also gives the illusion of a short amount of time passing between Griffin and Lance arriving, making Lance's scene land much more strongly, because it doesn't feel like it's just one thing happening one after another, if that makes sense.

There's no need to explicitly say Lance released his anger after the few deep breaths, since everything after that shows us that, anyways.

The reply from Michael could've been a bit more subtle in implying that Griffin was different from the rest of the reapers, I feel.

There isn't any need for Michael to explain the situation back to Griffin; he has the information he got from Lance, and he knows Griffin's looking for the soul, so he can just get to the point immediately."

Griffin's sentence before the "duck!" comment could've been cut off mid-way, just to give the sense of something sudden happening to the reader.

I think it's better to just show Griffin leaving when he finds out what the last carriage is, and then Michael telling him they'd already checked it. It IMMEDIATELY shows Michael is (seemingly) capable enough to have thought to check the carriage, while showing Griffin's own determination to be certain. Otherwise, the reader's first instinct before Michael explains they'd checked it is "duh, of course there's someone in there" and Michael saying they checked it afterwards doesn't really land as well as it could've.

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