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The City Forsaken by the Sun

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Oct 14, 2021

The first thing I hear when I awake is footsteps. I hear them walking down my hallways. How dare they enter without my permission. I see their shadows. They cannot see me, but I see them coming closer and closer and closer until they stop. They enter the last room I saw [HIM]. There is an ache in my heart whenever I go near that room. The rusty cogs that hold me together tremble in their place. [HE] has been gone for too long. I miss the sound of [HIS] voice. I miss the way [HE] held me. I must stop thinking about [HIM] and [HIS] everything. I cannot stop. 

Their faces are hidden from me. They have obscured themselves beneath their helmets, but I do not need to see them. Their scents are so different, it is not hard to distinguish them. The one that glows exits the room first without the smaller one. I hear the smaller one's voice, but never do I hear the one that glows. Can they not speak? Are they like me? [HE] told me that I didn’t need a voice, but [HE] lied to me. The scientists didn’t want me talking to [HIM], so they took it away. 

The smaller one exits the room next, joining the one that glows. A piece of paper is clutched in the smaller one's hand. I remember that paper. [HE] and the scientists used to write about me on them. I never found out what they said. [HE] never taught me what the symbols meant. Now, I do not feel the need to learn. Words and voices have one use, and that use is meaningless to me. I am alone.

I am alone, and I am hungry. Their scents are so different, but they both smell so good. My stomach aches from its emptiness. I watch as they walk back down the halls, oblivious to me following them. Maybe not. The smaller one is running, and that alights something within me. I want to chase them. No, I need to chase them. The one that glows starts running too. Perfect, they will fill me up. [HE] never let me get hungry. But [HE] is gone, so I feel starvation carve out a place in my life. I am always on the brink of being gone too. 

I run behind my meal, making sure to keep distance between us. However, it was too much. I see them disappear up the stairs and into the arms of [MWIZI]. Slinking back into the darkness of the city, I plan what to do next. [MWIZI] cannot protect them forever. Even I know that [MWIZI's] gaze is cyclical. When [MWIZI] falls, I will hunt. 

The steady clicking of my heartbeat echoes through the halls. The creaking of my inner workings punctures the monotone beat, filling the air with stilted screams. [HE] would be proud of how far I have come. I am exactly what [HE] wanted me to be. I am perfect.

Audahlys
Audahlys

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Since this episode is so short, there's going to be two updates this week. The other will still be on Saturday.

I've never been one to write in first person, so this is a first for me. It felt very strange. I hope you enjoy ?'s POV!

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Ivan Skilling
Ivan Skilling

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Uh oh we got company!!! The bad kind of company!
Love the voice in this POV btw. Feels very chilling! ;)

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