mantis and troy issue 2
Page 1 cover space ship titanic upside down in outer space
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1.1 "(title) Time, Space and The
Narrator"
Page 2 Back with our heros
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2.1 a man wearing a suit is next
to a microphone
2.2 amine style splash page with
a Benny being held on to by
a green crane as troy tries
to use his ice powers on the
machine
2.3 Sifu mark throws benny in the
air
2.4 Troy catches him with one hand
2.5 Benny grabs a grappling hook
form his belt of many pouches
2.6 it grabs on to a ledge
2.7 as troy gives him cover as
Benny slides up
2.8 Benny gets to the top of the
building and the giant robot
is still higher when were he
is standing
NARRATOR
Last time our heroes just got
started as they were facing a
giant robot that was half broken
lets watch
SIFU MARK
(whispers)
Iron body style
MANTIS
ok there should be a grappling
hook on yoru belt use it!
BENNY
anything else you didn’t tell me?
Page 3 mean while on space ship titanic
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3.1 an large spaceship is flying
in outer space is getting way
to close to the earth
3.2 Benny looks up to see a very
large space ship in the sky
3.3 Benny shouts to the group BENNY
There is a giant thing in the sky
3.4 Sifu now as a green panther is
attacking the giant robot
3.5 a group of people sliding down
in Victorian garb
3.6 the main engine explodes in
the back of the ship
3.7 the captain of the ship sits
dead in his seat
SIFU MARK
Kid, later i am buzy
Caption: meanwhile inside of
spaceship titanic.
Page 6 (splash page, Benny’s back as he looks up to the Space ship
Titanic)
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6.1 close up on Benny crying (thought)
This can’t be happening
6.2 His mother and his graying
beard father wearing working
shirts and overalls while his
father is using plastic swords
against him
6.3 His mother straightens his tie
as he gets ready for his frist
day of work
Caption: Meet Benny’s family his
mother Linda and father Richard,
are working class family
Caption: 2 days before his first
job
MOM
good luck at your first day of
work
Page 7
(splash page from mantis point of veiw of opening his eyes
and seeing glass around him)
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7.1 Caption: now you know the real
story of what really happened!
Page 8 (splash page from mantis point of veiw of opening his eyes
and seeing glass around him)
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8.1 a Band wearing brown suits
with long hair and beards rock
the stage with the logo of the
Beatles
8.2 Looking straight at the reader
the narrator yells
8.3 Narrator freaks out as pieces
of paper are thrown into the
air ( panel is on it’s side)
8.4 Narrator’s hands presses
buttons
Caption: mean while in 1966
NARRATOR
this is too soon what are you
doing?
NARRATOR
you got to be kidding me
8.5 warning red light flashes NARRATOR
I guess it’s going to be one of
those days
Page 10 mean while on the space ship
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10.1 Benny pulls up on the stick on
the controls of the space ship
10.2 The space ship titanic pulls
up over the scene of mantis,
troy and mark are still
fighting the giaint robot (
should fill up the rest of the
page)
BENNY
for the love of Gore come on
Page 11 narrator’s plight
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11.1 Narrator looks up to a rainbow
sky
11.2 a fox wearing all shades of
the color blue suit willy
wonka style holding a old gun
smiles at the narrator
Caption: this isn’t look good
Caption: who is this guy?
BLUNDERBUSS
my name is Blunderbuss Shane,
welcome to the gray world, Welcome
Narrator known as professor
Trigger.
11.3 Narrator raise his eyebrow Caption: Doesn’t look gray
11.4 Blunderbuss turns from The
Narrator
BLUNDERBUSS
the Jews call it the Grey world,
others call it the blue either,
some call it heaven,
11.5 Blunderbuss raises his hand BLUNDERBUSS
but really this is the space
between spaces, like a gate way
to other world but its the same
earth
11.6 the narrator shimmers his eyes NARRATOR
you mean like other earths?
11.7 Blunderbuss faceplams BLUNDERBUSS
no, alternate universes, and
the one you were narrating about
just seemed wrong the time sphere
seemed to be out of phase
Page 12 (splash page)
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12.1 medium shot of Blunderbuss’s
scientific lab while he is
holding a neon green hologram
of earth 4204
BLUNDERBUSS
I wondering whats going on in that
universe?
Page 13 doctor who moment
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13.1 Benny turns the controls left
as the room glows red
13.2 Benny turns the controls right
as the room changes as Benny
starts to have spiky hair and
a long trench coat for no real
reason
13.3 Benny flips a switch
13.4 the space ship Titanic turns
into a red banana as it rushes
towards space
13.5 Benny holds on to the controls
as half of his body turns into
house cat for no real reason
13.6 blunderbuss laughs on
the floor as he looks at
Benny from a view screen
13.7 Benny still holding on the
controls as his hands turn
into paws
Caption: That’s a main character
don’t laugh
BLUNDERBUSS
I can’t help it he looks so cute!
Caption: this doesn’t look good
for our hero!
Page 14 more weirdness (full splash page)
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14.1 Benny has turned into a cat
while in a mirror behind him
stands human benny crying
Caption: Will our hero be in a cat
between a hard place?
Page 15 full splash page
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15.1 Mantis flyies towards the rest
of the group with a cast on
Caption: will the rest of them
find out about The Giant ship who
almost hit the city, find out next
week, same Mantis time Same Mantis
channel
Page 16 letter to the Writer
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16.1 Hello Readers this is the
narrator and blunderbuss here!
if you have any questions
to us please put it in the
comments section or write to
us we would love to hear from
you!