mantis and troy-3
Page 1 cover: Benny looking in the mirror inside the space ship
Titanic seeing a cat-folk in mirror
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1.1 "Alternate worlds"
Page 2 The cat-normal
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2.1 The "Air-Flight Stewardess"
Polly opens the door to the
cockpit and is surprised to
see Benny still holding the
stick
2.2 Benny smiles as he blushes
while trying to keep the ship
steady
2.3 Blunderbuss and Narrator
looks at Benny’s face though a
monitor
2.4 Blunderbuss tilts his hat and
laughs
POLLY
Captain?
BENNY
Look, The Captain passed out...
BLUNDERBUSS
Good!, Now everything is set on
course
NARRATOR
Oh my Gore, what did you do?
Caption: Meanwhile in outer-space
Caption: What a jerk!
2.5 Blunderbuss smiles BLUNDERBUSS
Now, let’s see whats on the news?
2.6 A fuzzy TV picture of The Pope Caption: The Pope Vistula comes
to the the dark continent today
and...
2.7 The Pope transforms into a
small kitten
2.8 The Pope turns again into a
cat-person
Caption: I can’t believe my eyes!
Caption: What is this?
Page 4 (splash page) The Pope as a cat baptizes a child with
milk.
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4.1 CAT POPE
Enomino Patri kitty catty
Page 5
(splash page) The Pope as a cat baptizes a child with
milk.
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5.1 Blunderbuss tilts his hat as
he turns towards the screen
5.2 Benny’s paws are around the
controls trying to hold on
5.3 Blunderbuss pushes a red lever
down
5.4 Benny turns back into his
normal self as the controls
start to buckle
5.5 BLUNDERBUSS changes his TV
screen to BRC’s Slowing Dying
5.6 A group a guys are playing
cards while a woman stands
guard
5.7 A man looks at his cards MAN-1
Go fish!
BLUNDERBUSS
Let’s see what happened to that
old space ship
BLUNDERBUSS
Oh, you looked so worried, don’t
worry.... Back to normal....
BLUNDERBUSS
Page 6 Back with Benny
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6.1 The Narrator looks angry as he
faces BLUNDERBUSS
6.2 the Narrator snarls his lips
and points straight at the
reader
6.3 BLUNDERBUSS hears a knock from
the door
6.4 BLUNDERBUSS opens the the door
into the rest of the gray
world with a mysterious man
in the shadows.
6.5 The man in black takes off his
black robes it’s The Rabbi of
Time and Space.
6.6 BENNY looks confused as
he looks at a view screen
of what’s going on in
Blunderbuss’s console room.
6.7 The "flight-Stewardess"Polly
holding on to BENNY tight as
they make a sharp turn left.
Caption: I am the Narrator, I am
9000 years old and you wont have
the power of this story or any
other!
BLUNDERBUSS
You, you think you can stop me!?
???
Did someone order a pizza?
BLUNDERBUSS
No,but...
Caption: Oh thank goodness you’re
here The Rabbi
RABBI
I am the protector of the many
worlds, and I am here to stop you!
BLUNDERBUSS
Two on one! Not very fair of you,
Narrator.
BENNY
Well, that’s a TV show I never
want to watch.
POLLY
We don’t have enough space pods to
get everyone out
BENNY
I figured. Hold on tight!
Page 7
splash page
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7.1 The SPACESHIP TITANIC hurdles
towards the Earth
Page 8 splash page
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8.1 The Passengers hold on to
their seats for dear life
Page 9 Benny saves the day kind of?
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9.1 a very tired BENNY tries to
get The controls stable
9.2 The SPACESHIP TITANIC
underbelly is getting shredded
to pieces
Caption: Will, the mighty Ship
still sail in the sky?
9.3 Close up on BENNY’S eyes BENNY
Come on, old girl just make it to
Gore Station
9.4 The ship hits water for a
second...
9.5 ..,and lands with a crunch on
the sandy shore
Page 10
young ro-mance
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10.1 SNAKE-Girl smiles as she sees
BENNY
10.2 BENNY is getting out of the
ship with the rest of the crew
10.3 SNAKE-GIRL stands on a hill
over-looking the group as the
rain begins to pour.
10.4 BENNY thinks about his friends
back at the last issue for
a second as survivors are
thanking him
10.5 A group of Tv news anchors
try to gather around BENNY
SNAKE GIRL
Very smart, little one, but can
you take us on at the election?
BENNY
Get away from me!!!!!
10.6 Blackness Caption: ...Then it was silent....
10.7 BENNY appears where the broken
robot’s leg was supposed to be
10.8 Blackness Caption: What is this strange
power Benny has?
Page 11 Down with the rain
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11.1 SIFU MARK in giant puma form,
pushes the robot down after
the leg is missing (POW!)
11.2 the Giant ROBOT falls down
with a (THUD) into the mud
SIFU MARK
take that!
11.3 SIFU MARK turns to BENNY, SIFU MARK
Oh! There you are, Dragonfly. What
happen to you?
11.4 BENNY walks away from SIFU
MARK
BENNY
Long story, boss
Caption: What will happen to the
Amazing Dragon-Fly known as Benny
Baker?
Page 12 Home is where your parents live (splash page)
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12.1 Thunder and lighting crash as
Benny, wearing a hoody,puts
his keys into the front door
Page 13 Reality is Surreal
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13.1 BENNY looks to a record player
playing "Rock Around The
Clock","CHUCK BERRY" ,but the
room seems off
13.2 BENNY slowly walks into the
living room
13.3 BENNY turns as the record
stops, and a message plays
13.4 Benny screams angrily as black
mist swirls around him
13.5 The GENERAL SPADE in a
recording booth
13.6 Benny snarls as he heads to
his room
13.7 Benny opens the door to his
room
Hello, Benny We figured you were going
BENNY
What have you done to them?
GENERAL SPADE
Don’t worry. We used the new
molecular transformer to put them
into suspended animation!
GENERAL SPADE
Well, if you follow the rules, you
will see them again.....
Caption: What could be in his
room?
13.8 The door opening BENNY
They can’t take you away, old
friend
Page 14 Benny and the owl
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14.1 A lone stuffed owl lies on top
of the bed
14.2 BENNY runs towards the bed as
the record player plays
14.3 BENNY jumps on the bed happily
14.4 BENNY holds up the white owl
on the bed and chuckles to
himself
GENERAL SPADE
I should see you know crying like
a baby
Caption: End scene
Page 15 splash page
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15.1 Next Comic #4: The Nature of
Evil
Page 16 Ben’s soapbox stand!
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16.1 Hey there, I am a person,
a male, named Ben known as
the thunder otter. I live, on
finding others hobbies, and
watching late at night horror
films. its 4 am do you know
where, your boom stick is? I
don’t i watch my hands like a
kung-fu master, in the dark.
Who knows what evil lurks in
the hearts of men, the shadow
knows! brainstorm-on readers!