Ophelia is taking interest in me. How nice. She still seems a little startled when I speak. She will get over it. She has to. We are stuck here. Oh gosh, we are stuck here. Oh no. For how long? Why did we arrive When did we get When did she How are I do not What YoGrGFHWYSJIUIDV.
I... do not... want... to die.
“We should start moving“. Ophelia! What an idea! She is so smart. Of course, I did think of that. My head was just much too full of questions to think clearly. Ophelia will act as my rock. A replacement rock. The one I had at home sucked anyway.
I just stumbled into your small stories while looking around new novels to feed my hungry mind. I really like your novel and as you suggested want to give you some pointers which might be of help, even if you'r writing is of age as of now. Spacing between you'r lines of text are a must have to not let you'r readers be shocked by the sheer amount of text. I hope you can pick up writing again and maybe rewrite this or perhaps even have another creative idea like this one. I'm looking forward what you can create.
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