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The Story of the Rise of the Strongest and Cruelest Demon lord

Daisy's grand plan

Daisy's grand plan

Jun 03, 2022

003-Daisy's grand plan


Jake could not be present during his trial since he was accused of being a vampire and could use mind control to manipulate the trial. The more people a vampire transforms, the more powerful they get thereby strengthening their mind control. So, Jake was confined to the royal family's castle prison while the trial took place.

What Jake could do was ask people to represent and defend him. The person responsible for representing him would be his brother Peter. To defend him, Jake could only count on his brother, as all his trusted men were killed in an attempt to kidnap the kingdom's second princess.

What Jake didn't know was that the entire trial itself was a sham for him to lose his marquis position and any other noble office he might be have. It was also meant to cancel his engagement to the second princess and most importantly make his brother the new Lord of the Aldcrest fiefdom.

By accusing Jake of being a vampire the royal family prevented Jake from being able to be present during the trial. By killing all the men who were loyal to him for the reason of trying to kidnap the second princess, the royal family made Peter the only person who Jake could be count on to be present at the trial.

Unknowingly Jake had been involved in a royal family scheme where no one could save him.

Two days later Peter came to find Jake in the royal family's castle prison.

"Brother, Judgment is over"

"How did it go?"

"It's bad. As for the charge of you being a vampire, the Supreme Court found it false. But they proved that there was an attempt to kidnap the second princess and it was made by the men of Aldcrest fiefdom and they were ordered by Jake Aldcrest"

"Weren't those men the ones who had gone to capture the centaurs?"

"Yes, they were. Why?"

"How does centaur subjugation turn into an attempt to kidnap the second princess?"

"As for that brother, there was no one who saw the centaurs or any evidence of them in that area or in the whole of Aldcrest fiefdom"

"How is that possible? It was you Peter who told me there was a centaur sighting. Besides, it was you who also gave the order to the men to go and capture the centaurs."

"For that brother, it seems that the information of the centaurs sighting was false, according to the account it was a false sighting"

"How come there was a false sighting of centaurs? They are not small and careful beings where they step, how can there be a false sighting of centaurs Peter, explain that to me if you don't mind"

At this moment Jake was starting to get annoyed when he heard a laugh in the distance.

"hahaha, Looks like our dear Jake has already started to suspect something. Well, let's get out of this whole farce and tell him the truth so that he's even more desperate"

"Daisy, what do you mean by that?"

Daisy was the second princess of the Eyozosha empire and Jake's current fiancée.

Withe_Reaper
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MiracleShot
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The pacing felt fast to me. Either way it's good.

Quick tip: When two characters are talking, there's no need to add their names in the dialogue because reader can tell that they're the only ones who was talking. For example: You will join the humanity army for 10 years Jake to be able to absolve.

It should be: You will join the humanity army for 10 year to be able to absolve.

See the difference, and another example of like: Don't worry Jake, Peter is too important.

It should be: Don't worry, Peter is too important.

Peter is a good way to mention his name because he wasn't part of the conversation in the first place since it's only two characters are talking.

I don't wanna be sounded like a professional here, i just wanna help on what i got on my feedbacks before. But, i hope my advice did help you😁

And will continue reading your work.

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With the betrayal of his brother and the woman he loved, Jake lost his lands and was accused of false crimes. In order not to be sentenced to death, he joined the army. In the last fight against the Demons before getting freedom Jake was betrayed and killed for the one he most trust.

At the time of his death he received an unexpected offer.

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Sorry in advance, English is not my first language, so they may be grammatical errors and misspelled words. Besides being my first story Please bear with me. I'm trying to improve to provide a better story.

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