The otherside
Jun 26, 2022
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A BURNING DESIRE?
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Few things I’d like to point out just off a quick note, rather than an in-depth analysis. I strongly believe that the way characters are being introduced is degrading the story itself, although, it’s good to have a versed cast of characters within unique settings, the pace is something that’s really hurting it in my opinion. Furthermore, it’s also nice to introduce the various types of things, setting, events, aspects, etc. However, I strongly believe the execution of various things could be done much better. There’s some more, but, my intention is to not critic you, keep on going, you got it!
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