Destiny's Piper 1
Jul 19, 2022
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Great enticing start. It makes the readers so curious that we have to keep reading.
Awesome imagery.
I love the way you include small details here and there to give us small hints about what's going on here.
The insight into his feelings and thoughts is also a great addition here, to understand him better.
Her view of him is also an interesting addition.
The punishment does sound too harsh to me.
That sure was noble of him.
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