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Fast

Fast

Aug 24, 2022

A crushing weight, 
Suffocating,
Choking.

Expectation.
Achievement.
Success.

Sometimes, 
I wish it would all just
Stop.

Sometimes, 
I wish it would all just
Wait.

Time is passing
Too fast,
For me.

Too fast.

Sometimes, 
I wish it would all just...

Give me a chance.

I just need a break,
Before I break.

A shattering,
Wrenching, 
Sickening...

Sense of failure.

Guilt.
Shame.
Embarrassment.

It's too much.

Everything is too much.

I just need more time.

I need more time.
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Err im not actually that sad i just listened to a track of music and thought eh ill write a poem

I love writing sad poems idk why it just feels like im getting all these emotions out there

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Elizabeth Kay (Eli)
Elizabeth Kay (Eli)

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The way you wrote this poem is so fitting to its them because it really gets the “too much” in its words across. I don’t know how to explain it but I can just /feel/ the overwhelmed emotions pouring from this poem. Am I making sense? Probably not. I’m rambling now 😂

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just some (admittedly kinda sad) poems I've written just about,,,things in my life. I'm only putting them on here because I want to get my feelings out, and writing poetry helps, but now it's like I need to go the extra step and have them *out* there, if that makes sense.

feel like I should put content warnings on, for like. depression. sad thoughts. but none of the poems thus far are like oh I'm sad, it's about situations or whatever so it's ok
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