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Dhanurana

Chapter 1: The Outside Girl

Chapter 1: The Outside Girl

Sep 27, 2022

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Janurana gripped her parasol as if it were a weapon. She stared back through the impenetrable night of the Outside’s forest but saw only the still scorched and gnarled trees. All was silent. Reluctantly, she turned from the darkness and continued running towards the distant city.

That night’s deafening silence made all guards atop the Capital’s walls bristle. Both the ranks and the officer with them strained their leather-gloved hands on their bronze weapons. Rather than use the dice in their pockets, they scanned the ever-shifting silhouettes of the Outside.

Janurana broke free of the tree line and entered the field of stumps and saplings that extended to the city walls, dotted with raging bonfires. She collapsed onto one. Hyperventilating, she clasped at her chest, and tried to stand again, but it was no use. Her legs refused to move. 

Suddenly, her back seized. Janurana whipped around. She dug her hand into the stump and scrambled to her feet as the faintest sliver of pale blue flickered far in the distance. She was exposed. 

The guards couldn’t see her at all as she ran through the expanse, struggling to make out even the shaking outline of a tree beyond the bonfire’s light. They angled large reflective discs of polished bronze built behind the fires toward the base of the wall to illuminate its entrance. Despite the roar of the flames, they could tell how unnaturally quiet that night had become.

Janurana bolted through the no man’s land, effortlessly leaping over stumps and not making a single sound as she ran, until she crashed against the light’s edge. She staggered back and sent up a cloud of dust. Having barely caught her breath from hyperventilating, she struggled to breathe through the plume. When she spun around again, hands against the light as if it were a wall, the distant pale blue sliver had stopped. It shuttered in place, then slid from side to side. 

Janurana watched, frozen. Even through her massive clump of wild black hair, Janurana saw another gleam of blue behind her. She spun and, rather than the same sliver of blue, she saw a glowing string of unfamiliar, angular runes carved along the wall’s length.

She checked the forest yet again, and the wisp was nowhere to be seen. Janurana wanted to collapse and finally take a breath. Instead, she tried to press through the light. However, the patched and sullied hem of her sari, ringed with ivory white accents, compressed against its edge. She recoiled, unable to enter the intangible threshold.

Tensing up and eyes wide, Janurana frantically looked up and down the wall for some gap in the fire’s protection. She saw none and checked along the top, spotting the guards.

A few of them had finally noticed Janurana and were struggling to make out whether she was a person or any other Outside creature kept at bay by the fire’s barrier. Others stared past her into the distance, having not heard Janurana approach at all.

“Hello?” Janurana squeaked. She could barely bring herself to be louder than a whisper and tightened her fingers further around her cream–colored parasol, slotting them deeper into their worn position on the handle.

The guards didn’t respond. 

“Good evening?” She prepared herself and raised her wavering voice, “I shudder to think such great walls unguarded!”

She jumped at her own volume as it echoed and shattered the still of the night. An arrow thunked into the ground at her feet.

“R-reveal your name, weapon, and state your business!” The gate captain stuttered, but his voice remained powerful. He wore a breastplate of solid bronze that glowed in the firelight.

“And direct your escort to show themselves!” added another guard who notched another arrow, having loosed toward the sudden sound. Her only real armor was her bronze helm.

“I’m quite alone, sir and madam!” Janurana called up.

The guards strained to make out Janurana since she stood beyond the periphery. She looked and sounded like a young adult with a full, bottom–heavy shape, but chubby cheeks and round, innocent–looking eyes that darted back and forth. Though she appeared no more than twenty, she was unshaken by the guard’s arrows and bowed steadily with her hands together, her wild black hair draping over her shoulders, contrasting her complexion that was much lighter than theirs. Janurana carried herself as a noble, even held a parasol, but she was alone, and dirty.

The captain scanned the sea of stumps for any atypical movement, but not a single Chohtah imp or mangy wolf scraped at the light’s boundary. However, further in the distance, past the tree line was an unearthly, silvery blue glimmer. It was too far to look like anything more than that.

Other than Janurana, the night was silent and the guards exchanged looks of confusion and worry. The armored captain slid his bow over his shoulder and unfurled a rope ladder, cautiously and methodically descending. He passed in front of the great cedar gate with bronze barring near every line of the wood’s grain.

“Good evening, honored guardsmen. I hope your night has been safe.” Janurana bowed once more as the captain hopped from the ladder, kicking up a puff of ashy dust.

“Thank you.” He dropped to a bow, putting his fists together. Her accent was off putting to him. It wasn’t anything he’d heard but wasn’t so peculiar to be fully foreign. He cleared his throat and got into the character of his work. “You have a seal?”

“Of course, sir!” Janurana forced a giggle, and the guard cocked his brow. She produced her clay seal, weathered and chipped, from a pocket inside her sari. It was no larger than her palm.

Though her expression remained chipper, Janurana refused to look at it, staring at the captain instead. His thickly gloved hand clipped off a corner of the worn tablet when he took it. She grimaced at the sound. Nevertheless, she kept her gaze locked on him.

The more he examined it, the more the seal looked like that of a governor’s house, not a mere trader. He curled his lips in confusion. It bore a bull–horned woman sitting between a tiger, a turtle, an elephant, and a rhino. Above it, he found an unfamiliar name, ‘Malihabar’. Next to it, scrawled close to the elephant was ‘Janurana’. It was rough, and not just because of its weathered letters. As far as the captain could tell, the first name was the family name.

“It’s just you then?” he asked, looking behind her.

Janurana shot her head around then nodded. “Yes,” she said smiling, her tone hardened.

“Uh huh. You weren’t ambushed?” He waved the tablet about. “Split up? Anything?”

“As I said, it’s just me, sir,” she said, her smile waning further.

She suddenly snatched for the tablet fast enough to surprise the captain. His warrior instincts were honed and he jumped back, almost dropping the seal. He reached for the ax on his belt loop, a sharpened bar of bronze on a carved handle as his comrades on the wall focused their arrows or wound up their slings, but the captain paused. 

Janurana had ran into the wall of light only to crash against it and fall into the dirt again. She scrambled back, still on the ground, and frantically checked every tree for any movement.

The captain did a single panning scan and saw nothing. He offered her a hand. “Not used to the silence?”

“Uhm, yes—Well, I mean, no, it’s that I thought.” Janurana took his hand. She dusted off her sari, still keeping an eye on the forest. “I thought I saw something.”

“Uh huh. Weird how quiet it is tonight. Are you foreign?” He motioned to her face.

“Not,” Janurana hesitated. “Entirely.” She twitched impatiently.

The captain curled his lips again. He further examined Janurana’s sari. It was covered in repairs by less than skilled hands but was clearly not common, being made entirely of thick jamawar fabric. It was colored light cream with deep brown stripes along its length, or at least would have been where it wasn’t faded or tarnished. Her parasol was made of the same material and colored the same, but the rings on the tip of each rib were lacking the adornments every other parasol had. Rough patches of haphazard fabric pulled together the hewn pieces of her outfit, including one particularly heavy looking patch on her hip which bore thick seams from repeated sewings. The sari hung on her heavily, pooling around her boots. Given the mud and wear on her hem, it was clear she wasn’t recently lost in the Outside. The dry season was ending, so mud was a rare commodity. Rather than being covered in dehydrated flakes of dirt that were easily beaten off, she looked as if she had headbutted multiple monsoons without a change of clothes.

“Alright then.” He paused. “I suppose this is all in order…” Stepping back through the light as he spoke.

When he returned to the top of the wall, he was bombarded with questions by the female guard. The captain confirmed to her and the others that Janurana was alone, did seem foreign, but her seal was valid.

The bars rumbled as the mechanisms churned from inside. They retracted and lifted respectively, grinding the gate open, and spattered up reddish–brown dust to further sully Janurana’s sari. The guards bid her entry.

With a massive sigh, she stepped forward through the light’s threshold. It took effort, but only subtly so. With a bit of exertion, she managed to push through the light the same way one might push through a crowd. When she had finished, Janurana merrily strolled through the gate and marveled at the sky above. The heavy cloud cover of that night was slightly thinned over the city, revealing the violet moon that commanded the majority of the sky. It was blanketed in its swirling storms as if it were simply a massive cloud itself.

She watched the gate closing behind her, relieved that anything on the other side would need time to burst through.

The guards on the wall didn’t put as much faith in their defenses. A few more had come to the fire above the gate, including another captain in bronze scales. They all drew their bows, loaded their slings, or clenched the handles on the gleaming disk to direct the fire’s light further out, prepared for the wolves and Chohtah imps.

But none appeared. Not even a scrape on the light’s edge broke the heavy silence settling on the night once more as the last bar locked into place. The guards loosened their grips. They stood smothered by the quiet.

“Sir.” The female guard turned to the captain who’d met with Janurana. “Did you hear her move down there?”

The captain didn’t respond.

“Alright, was I seeing things or did she have trouble passing the boundary?” Asked another guard, stepping down from the fire.

The scale armored captain stepped closer to his counterpart. “I thought you said it was a moon or something before the Gwomon got here,” he whispered.

The one who greeted Janurana clenched and unclenched his fingers as he scanned the tree line once more. Again, he spotted the same silvery blue movement. It almost looked like a woman’s figure, not quite visible and circling the path Janurana had taken. It slid about, as if pacing. The captain peered over the wall, watching the runes at its base gently glow brighter as the figure approached and retreated.

With a worried grimace, he raced away to report what he had seen.


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Out of an unnaturally quiet night, a bedraggled woman in noble finery requests access to the southern capital. Who she is has been lost to most, but her existence will throw everything out of balance

#Fantasy #lgbt #India #bipoc #female_protagonist #Historical_Fiction #vampire #gl #bronze_age

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The way you described this story is fantastic! This first chapter has me really excited to read more! Great work!

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Out of an unnaturally quiet night, a bedraggled woman in noble finery requests access to the southern capital. Who she is has been lost to time for most, but her continued existence will throw everything further out of balance.

Janurana had barely survived her royal house's destruction at the hands of foreign invaders, surviving day by day in the scattered pocket forests and arid shrub lands, constantly escaping the ghosts of her past.

The south has barely survived their recent Pyrrhic victory against the north immediately followed by a coup. The north is bloodied but unbowed, on the brink of civil war, but still ready to take up arms against the southern invaders.

The leaders of the south cannot afford another obstacle.

And Janurana is just that.

Yet her chance meeting with a woman expelled from the warrior class named Dhanur gives them both a chance to avenge the ones they loved, finish what they failed to do, and return to a normal life.

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Set in a fantasized bronze age India featuring LGBT female leads. Told in an omniscient pov with glances into multiple characters.
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