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I Become Karna With Million Times Crit System In Mahabharta.

1. I Asked System As A Boon I

1. I Asked System As A Boon I

Oct 10, 2022

"Run!!! Run for your life, That evil minded one attacking us. It seems like the God of death himself appred on this battlefield."

"Leave your weapons, Just get away from that Astra(Throwable weapons like arrow, dart etc)."

"What kind of divine Astra is that? Why was it constantly raining down weapons?" 

"Don't think about it, Just run, Don't you see even prince arjun run away from here, So what are you waiting for? Let's retreat!!!."

There was constant wailing, complients, and fearful voices of soldiers on the battlefield. 

If you look at surroundings you will find that there was a sea of army's from two different factions. Both parties were filled with fearless, mighty warriors, Who were not afraid of death.

But an anomaly occurred on this battlefield, One party's mighty fearless soldiers were doing something that no one ever imagined can be done by these mighty warriors.

Retreating. If you put it nicely they were retreating and if you said it truthfully then they were running. These warriors who weren't even afraid of death were running holding their tails between their legs.


It's not their fault though they are indeed ready to galdy give up their life on the battlefield. Just as in the past 16 days of the war no one from both parties took one step back from the field even when casualties reached in the millions. 

But today's situation is different, Past 16 days, although dying, they felt like they had a fair chance to win. That's why they were fighting with all of their might but today's situation changed. 

One man in a chariot fired a weapon that they had never seen before, After it launched whole Sky was illuminated, Air stagnated, the Earth trembled, it felt like the end of the world. 

Just as it launched it killed hundreds of thousands of troops in an instant. Stunning all the viewers by that sight, They felt like they were in a nightmare , unfortunately this was just the beginning of their nightmare. 


Because that weapon never fell down nor did it disappear like other divine weapons but it stayed in the air. Hovering in the air like a repper that comes to rep there lives. 

*Trumble*

Earth split open, Sky looked like it was torn apart. Heaven and earth visions started to appear one after another. Chant of celestial mantras coming from every direction. What it felt like eternity was just a mere second time.

That weapon started its bombardment of weapons. Not only normal weapons but also divine weapons were constantly coming out of it as they cost nothing. Whole army couldn't help but panic, Half of them even started running while dragging their stunned comrades with them. Some brave one wanted to stand there ground and defend it but when they saw Arjun there groups strongest warrior was running away from this terror there will to stay also broken. 

And the reason why these soldiers were doing this unthinkable thing was just a single weapon fired by one extremely handsome man on a golden chariot. 

The weapon he fired was still in the air, constantly bombarding the battlefield with all kinds of deadly weapons with no sign of stopping. The mere number of casualties reached millions in a few moments. This fact alone is enough to show its might.

"Shayla took me to where Arjun is running off."

Handsome man calmly said to his chariot driver to take him to his arch nemesis. He was so calm as if he didn't have anything to do with the weapon in the sky raining down death.


Sunlight shines on him revealing his figure. His face was so sharp and perfect that it felt like it was sucputred by Vishwakarma (God's architect). His lotus-like eyes were so bright like a stars of a starry night. At this moment they were blank, there was not even a hint of pride, arrogance, or hatred in them. They were still like the surface of the lake and as pure as a new born baby. His neck length as dark as moonless night coloured hairs were drifting by the wind giving sharp contrast to his baby-like soft skin's fair complexion. Yet it not only decreases his beauty but enhances it making it feel like divine scenery.

His body is also not less than any art itself. His abdomen was like each muscle, each bone was precisely put there by the creator himself, Enhancing his beauty by many folds. His arms were like iron pillars with immense might in them. Though his body was not buff but on a slim side, But no one dared to underestimate his power.

He was wearing normal gloden body armour and mukute (Crown) for safety. 

He was wielding one extremely attractive and beautiful bow named Vijaya (Victory) in his hand. This is the bow his guru (Teacher) gave to him as a gift. 

This bow belongs to lord shiva and has a boon that anyone who wields this bow in battle will always be victorious. 

This is the first time in his life he was using this bow because he had a premonition in his heart that this day might be his final day. He wanted to fight with all he got and prove to the world that even Suta (Son of charioteer) can become great if given the right knowledge. 

"Shayla speed up, Today either i kill arjun or die trying!!!."

He roared, declaring the whole world his pledge like a lion. As he said it the sun shone on him illuminating his whole body making him look divine. He became the focus of all the audience. Even in a group of million soldiers he alone becomes the focus of attention.


"Look, he is my mitra (Friend). Look at his valour he alone forced their army to retreat. What are we waiting for ATTACK!!!" 

Man with muscular build with Mace in his hand yelled, Commanding his army to attack enemy soldiers. 

"Yes Yuvraj (Crown Prince)."

"Attack!!! Show them our might and wipe off 14th day's embarrassment with their blood."

"Yeah Look at their mighty warrior, didn't he run away like a cat seeing a mouse? hahah."

"Didn't he was so proud on the 14th day? Why now running like a coward? Is he afraid of that weapon or shooter of that weapon? Hahaha."

The entire army started laughing. Indeed on 14th day of war arjun was so fierce that they felt hopeless but no one retreat half of step back but today just one weapon was enough to throw pandvas army out of battle. They were proud that a warrior was in their army.


"Madhav(Krishna's other name) Stop the chariot. Let me kill this evil minded one here and shut these people's mouths."

Man who spoke had a dark complexion but a handsome face. He was holding a silver coloured divine bow in his hand known as gandiv. He was son of indra Arjun.

At this time his anger reached to the top of his head. He helplessly had to watch that evil minded one killing his army. Not to mention he also forced him to retreat. 

He didn't want to but he had to admit it that he had no counter to the weapon fired by that man. This was making him more angry, He the greatest archer in the world wasn't able to counter Astra of low born Suta (Chariotior cast). This fact hit his ego hard. What is even more humiliating was that for a moment he truly felt fear of death. He also felt that the man in front of him was the god of death. He even subconsciously called him that. This humiliation can only be washed by that man's blood.

"Not yet, Time has not come yet."

Suddenly a soft calm divine voice sounded. Speaker had the same dark complexion. His face is like a celestial. He had an aura of divinity all around him making anyone close to him feel safe. Surprisingly, his body is the same as that man on the chariot , attractive and divine. They also had the same height. His name was Madhav or Krishna.

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(This story take place in different timeline and universe)

This is the story about boy named Karan getting recarnatated in the time of Mahabhrata. Biggest war at that time.

What will happen if he become karna in it?

What will happened if as a boon he ask System?

What will happen if he get to meet those characters? Is he able to chnage their destiny or it will turn worse?

Let's find out what will happen when he born into age of God's. Do he able to achieve what he wanted to or something else's.

(Note: I find that there is no mahabhart time novel with system. So I decided that take that task on myself and introduce system in the age of God's.)

Disclaimer: Remember this is fanfiction of Mahabhrata. Not "Orignal" Mahabhrata.

Also in the end there will be world travel after all I am going to make karna too OP, So he had to find different world.
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