Track 12: Bad Hair Day
Jan 18, 2016
Jason likes looking at himself.
BitterOath
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I read through your comic - it does well in setting the tone, and your style is pretty neat! I am curious enough about it to stick around...
But I noticed that it all seems to be set in the same...angle? A lot of the panels are straight on shots of the characters from their waists up - even if a story is good, formulaic panels can get boring to look at, and start interfering with the storytelling. On this page in particular, it works fine for when Jason is looking in a mirror, but it feels awkward on the last panel.
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