Chapter 3 (part 5)
Feb 04, 2016
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looking good, alot of panels on the pages. I would suggest lowering the count for your panels per page, this is from my own experience. Im not saying you shouldnt keep the panels I would suggest just making an additional page in the future and spreading them out a bit. (just a little constructive criticism) loving the story so far.
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