“Ow!"

She pushed me away, why is she acting like this? She's usually really nice!

“Leave us alone freak”

And she walked away, what do I do! What's going on, I need to figure it out.

*

I went to class, but I can't stop thinking about what was going on, maybe she was hypnotized, yes that's it! Yes… I know I asked her a bunch of times today, but maybe...just maybe! It's simply because she's hypnotized. If I ask more times maybe she would remember me. 

I turned around and looked at her. 

“Do you not remember me?”

 “how many times do I need to tell you….NO!!!” 

My teacher stared at us

“what’s going on” 

uh oh. This is bad. She heard us. I hope she’s not mad at us, the best thing to do is, to be honest. 

“Sorry, I was just asking Noelle a question.” 

“And did she answer?” 

This is good right? It doesn't look like she’s mad.

“y-yes” 

“ok…” 

good! It seems like she won't get us in trouble! 

“Detention” 

oh no...looks like I jinxed it. 

“I can't believe that I'm in detention!” 

“it's your fault” 

“I'm sorry, ok?” 

I really can't believe what I just did! I should've asked her during lunch. 

“I guess I can't blame you” 

wait…..did she just say what I think she just said...? I was right! I just had to ask her more times! I shouldn't have asked her during class tho… Well, at least she remembers me, but is it worth getting in detention for? Yes… yes, yes it is! The whole reason I joined this school was so I could find Noelle again. I should ask if we're friends now, just in case.

“Are we friends now?”

“I guess...”

Yes, that's great! If we’re friends now! I fulfilled my mission. I'll introduce her to my parents before this happens again! It'll be amazing, but as I was about to ask her a question, I looked into her eyes and they were….lifeless. I stepped back and stared at her helplessly when she suddenly screamed.

“I can’t believe you got me in detention! You're just an annoying ugly 1 heck of a freak!!!”

I couldn't believe what I just heard! We were friends at one moment and now, it's gone, as none of that happened! 

I ran to the other side of the room and started crying, I wish this never happened to Noelle and she was just her normal self. 

*

While I was walking to my next class I saw that another kid was getting bullied! What should I do? If I help them I'll probably get hurt….no...I have to, if I do, at least they won't be alone. 

I ran to the bully and told him to stop. Of course, they said no. That's when Noelle came and she walked in and stopped the bully, but not how you normally would! She just told the bully that what they were doing was lame, and they stopped. They walked away so I went to help the person up.

“Are you ok?” I'm really worried about him. I hope he’s ok!

“Yes I am good, I am Sam, thank you”

“You need to work on your grammar, or is it that it's easier to use commas? One of those things!”

“What is grammar?” he asked

That's surprising, maybe he doesn't speak English that well.

I tried to explain it to him, but he kept misunderstanding. At one point, he thought I was gonna give him a present! I mean, I don't mind but right now I'm worried about whether he's hurt or not. Maybe if I give him a present he’ll feel better!

“Follow me” he suddenly said out of the blue

I don't know what to do now so why not, even if it is bad, at this point I feel like I can take on anything and I won't be surprised.

I followed him and he led me to a girl.

“hi! My name's Olivia! How are you? I'm great! Sorry, I do talk a lot. Oh jeez, now I'm just talking more”

“H-hi”

She talks a lot and I feel a little uncomfortable but she seems like a nice girl and I don't want her to be sad just because she has a lot to share with me. 

I made this a while ago and I want to remake it so I can fix some of the plot holes. Should I do that?

-Vanessa