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Chasing Grief

Paradise

Paradise

Jun 04, 2023

For you I must travel 
The high seas and all of the mountains 
In summer and winter, in spring and fall 
For you I shall search far and wide til they close all curtains

What paradise have I landed on? 
What place on Earth have my eyes laid upon? 
Is this Eden, where men first fell? 
The heaven where stories of freedom they tell?

Greatest of all adventurers 
Even Odysseus cannot dream of such wonders 
Scent so heavenly; the sight, otherworldly 
This celestial land I must venture upon gallantly

I sought God among all mares and deer 
Even in trees so tall one can say, "I am here" 
But if God did create all these wondrous marvels 
Why, then, does despair exist outside of novels?

Fields of flowers and crawling orchids 
No such being can ever think of something sordid 
Vines on trees, honey-scented fruits on the breeze 
How can I think of leaving all these, God forbid?

Upon green hills, atop, I see a herd 
Of sheep so tame songbirds can be heard 
At last, in sight was a man in simple robes 
His face was kind, as if it offers all hopes

Sunlight shone from above like a spotlight 
On all things dear to the heart of humankind 
Clouds came by across the sky so white 
By the sun they passed and offered me a path to find

By the beach I strolled, I peered ever so slowly 
Because how must I ignore the waters sparkling so beautifully? 
Despite all human logic deeming it impossible 
It's like rainbows were trapped; the sea inescapable

The backdrop changed before my feet stepped on the hilltop 
The sun set; blue, violet, orange spilled like ink on paper 
Mouth agape and heart crying in wonder, 
"How beautiful must this world be that human heart must stop?"
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Now I've decided to go after you, it would only make sense to seek the only One who knows everything in this world and the others. Indeed, no words can describe the place where I landed upon. If anything, it is in contrast to the feeling of my grieving heart.

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Hi! :)) Thanks for sticking by this story! This is the beginning of Chasing Grief's part two. It'll be quite an emotional adventure; more of a worldly history than imagery and metaphors of feelings. Please tell me what you think of it so I can improve it more :) Thanks for supporting! <3

#poetry #poem #love #romance #Chasing_Grief #loss #grief #Angst #paradise #heaven

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THE LAST VERSE!!! ∑(; °Д°) Wow I love it so much!!!!

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A poetic adventure of a woman navigating life after losing her love, Chasing Grief takes you in a swirl of imagery, scenery, and emotions. Join her as she recalls the past, yearns for her love, and journeys through the Earth, heaven, and hell to come to terms with her loss... or to reconcile with her heart.
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