Feine jumped toward Sasha to grab her but was instead ferociously stomped by Sasha, who used her tails to hide her next move and bait Fiene in to get in a critical hit...
However, Feine seemed to have almost completely absorbed the blow,
"I see you've improved over the years," Feine complimented as he grabbed both of Sasha's legs and spun her around before he slammed her into the ground with so much force a cloud of dust and dirt imploded from the earth...
Even with the extra protection of her tail, Sasha's body could barely handle the blow. Sasha retched as the impact seemed to have temporarily messed up her breathing.
Feine wasn't finished; he lifted his hand again to begin another strike...
Sasha clenched her teeth as she pulled herself out of her pain long enough to use her trump card.
The punch came down, and the force of the blow made the ground shake and caused all the dirt and dust in the air to clear...
Expecting to see an unconscious Sasha, Feine was surprised that his fist hadn't touched anything but the ground.
Turning around, he saw his daughter, Sasha, behind him... Sasha took a stance that a wild animal like a wolf would take while hunting or brawling. Her left eye was bright red, and her right was a pure blank white. Her face was covered in markings, and a sense of primal instinct took over her mind; her pupils were practically invisible, yet, Feine could tell her focus was on him...
Feine tilted his head dumbfounded as he sensed her potential increasing... "Is this her Mazokus doing?" he thought.
While Feine thought of what Sasha could have possibly done to accumulate such power, he failed to notice that Sasha was repeatedly swinging and dashing toward him to no avail as he easily dodged her bright and powerful strikes seemingly subconsciously.
With each strike she swung, a bright light flashed through the area.
"She must have unlocked a new ability," Feine thought as Sasha nearly missed his skull for the 67th time this minute.
"Lucky me," Feine thought. "My daughter is unique."
As Sasha tiredly went in for another blow, Fiene extended his hand, somehow causing Sasha to fly back into the house, knocking her out.
Feine made a crooked smile. "You're coming with me," he grinned, "I underestimated how much you could teach me."
Feine reached to pick up Sasha by her head but stopped for some reason...
"Oh, so you're awake again," Feine thought as he saw the previously unconscious boy with scrapes and bruises rise to his feet, holding a crushed soda can, his potential dramatically increasing...
Feine made a surprised face as he saw the boy, especially when he saw him turn into the Canned-Faced Mazoku.
'To think such demons exist", Feine laughed as he made an unforgettable demonic grin... "So you were the ace."
Fizz was thinking more precisely than ever, and in his crisp deep Mazoku voice, he spoke...
After a near-death experience, certain people acquire the ability to transform into a variety of monsters, From a can of soda on top of a supernaturally strong body- to a
300-meter skeleton from the waist up capable of mass destruction- This is the story of Fizz, Daniel, and Sasha as they struggle to find meaning in their destructive nature.
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... (this is drafting for an entire novel; in other words, this is to receive feedback before i basically redo this but 10x better"
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