The sound of cracking bones surrounded Fizz as he blinked for the first time in forever, but he couldn't keep his eyes open for some reason.
"Where-" he started to say with his dried-out throat but was suddenly interrupted by a warm embrace-
Sasha? no-
It was Daniel; Fizz could tell based on the hug's softness...
The boy Fizz and Sasha stole the Biofiles for. I guess Sasha finally came around to turning him into a mazoku...
Tears welled up in Fizz's eyes... "Im so happy-" Fizz started with his parched voice...
"I- missed you, Fin.", Daniel cried, like the crybaby he's always been.
Tears rolled down Fizz's chest as he heard the words "fin" slip from Daniel's mouth...
It was Fizz's orphanage name, the one he had never accepted anybody but Daniel calling him.
Fizz opened his eyes- and looked around, only to see that a ginormous skeletal rib cage blocked the light from the sunrise from hitting anyone within it; it appeared to have grown or dug itself into the ground as if its only goal was to protect everything inside.
"Sasha never came back," Daniel wailed... "On my diagnosed last day, I- "did" this and hurt everyone," He squeezed even harder into Fizz, his tears running down fizzes back...
Fizz tried to move his body, but he couldn't control anything below his neck...
Fizz turned around and saw a massive spinal cord coming out of his back and ascending into the skeletal mass...
Daniel put his hands on Fizz's shoulder, and water drooped onto his green hoodie... "Fin, I- should let you go, right?"
Fizz nodded...
Suddenly an immense feeling of relief flew through Fizz's body as he felt the vast "Spinal Spear" pull out of his back.
After a near-death experience, certain people acquire the ability to transform into a variety of monsters, From a can of soda on top of a supernaturally strong body- to a
300-meter skeleton from the waist up capable of mass destruction- This is the story of Fizz, Daniel, and Sasha as they struggle to find meaning in their destructive nature.
Feel free to discuss what you think about the story so far and what i could do better as a writer!
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... (this is drafting for an entire novel; in other words, this is to receive feedback before i basically redo this but 10x better"
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