Fizz and Daniel walked out of the supermassive ribcage and continued into the forest.
Fizz walked with both hands covering his lower regions, his body utterly defenseless to the natural properties of the forest...
"How long has it been?" Fizz spoke.
Daniel pulled up his hoodie. "I found you decapitated inside Sasha's abandoned house; you were still clinging to life," He frowned, "but, It took months to learn how to bring you back." He continued to walk Fizz down a maze of paths that eventually led to a gorgeous waterfall...
Daniel stopped in front of the storming waterfall.
"Any minute now," Daniel sighed...
30 seconds passed
2 minutes passed
15 minutes passed...
At this point, Fizz and Daniel had already moved from the waterfall and sat on some rocks near the waterfall to pass the time...
"What exactly are you waiting for?", Fizz asked as he stretched his arms...
"There's a secret training facility here; it's where I live now," Daniel said as he turned his gaze back to Fizz, briefly forgetting he was naked before turning away quickly again... "I- can't be seen in public anymore after the incident!"
"Is that where you learned to bring people back to life?" asked Fizz...
"Yeah, but their procedures can be a little- strange"-, Daniel cracked.
Fizz looked at Daniel, "What do you mean by- "strange"?"
"Y-you'll see," stammered Daniel as he stood up from the rocks- "I think I can hear the gateway opening."
"The what-" Fizz started but was interrupted by the opening of the waterfall that shined a bright light into Fizz's face.
The light faded, and through the opening, Fizz could see a tall girl with purple hair and a witch hat in what seemed to be a futuristic elevator...
"WIDHDLHSHLHLHA," wallowed Fizz as the girl called them over. "Are you coming or what?" she said...
Daniel dragged Fizz over by his hands...
The girl scoffed. "Whos your friend?"
Tumbling Fizz into the elevator, Daniel sighed. "It's Fin-" he cut himself off, which caused the girl to make a confused face at Daniel. "It Fizz, like the soda," he explained.
"Oh, that's nice, I guess," she said as she pushed a bright blue button...
The elevator rose, and Fizz began to catch his senses, "Who thi-." The elevator changed directions before Fizz could finish his question and slammed straight down. The Inertia made breathing difficult for Fizz, but he regained his breath as the elevator slowly came to a halt...
Fizz slumped over to the side of the elevator, "I- n- never want to do that a-again." he stammered...
"Oh, Your such a baby, Fizz," Teased the girl as she moved toward the opening door of the elevator, "Im Susie- but you can call me Slushie."
"Your name is a drink?" asked Fizz hypocritically...
Susie just shook her head at the question before moving into the next room...
Susie, Fizz, and Daniel followed her, entering a vast underground metropolis that seemed never to end with bright modern, white tiling that repeated on forever, it appeared to have a forever ascending roof, and in the underground sky, you could see flying cars and people. The ground was littered with bright lights, towering buildings, shops, and people all dressed in white uniforms or colorful, unique outfits that seemed to be pulled straight out of a DnD book or a fantasy novel.
"Holy Shit, how long have I been dead for!", Fizzy basked.
"I don't wanna talk about it," said Daniel as he quickly looked away...
"Wait, you brought someone back to li-" Susie started before Daniel quickly shushed her... "But that's against the rules."
"Since when have you ever cared about the rules?" Daniel said, "Besides, it will be fine as long as Mr. J doesn't find out."
"Find out about what," asked a voice echoing from behind them...
After a near-death experience, certain people acquire the ability to transform into a variety of monsters, From a can of soda on top of a supernaturally strong body- to a
300-meter skeleton from the waist up capable of mass destruction- This is the story of Fizz, Daniel, and Sasha as they struggle to find meaning in their destructive nature.
Feel free to discuss what you think about the story so far and what i could do better as a writer!
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... (this is drafting for an entire novel; in other words, this is to receive feedback before i basically redo this but 10x better"
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