Fizz sat alone in a sort of waiting room. He played with his thumbs and toyed with the futuritic decor that hovered of the ground...
He had received clothing from Professor J who initially thought he was training against the natural elements or something before being told otherwise.
He could hear arguing in many of the rooms, he couldn't tell if it came from the same direction that Slushi and Daniel came from.
"He noticed a refrigerator under one of the floating tables and moved towards it out of curiosity. The second he entered the proximity of the fridge, It bounced alive and with its cute robotic voice, it asked...
"would you like anything to drink"
"I can get you water-based products, milk-based-"
Fizz was so amazed by the fridge that he didn't hear anything the fridge was saying, or at least until he heard it say...
"I even serve soda-based products"
Fizz jumped up, his face full of excitement and his mouth watering at a chance to taste the sweet refreshing flavor of a "Fizzy".
Talking straight into the closed doors of the fridge he asked-
"Can I please have a Fizzy, Please?"
The Fridge immediately responded to his request, opening up and hitting him in the nose in the process.
Fizz let out a high-pitched gasp and jumped back from the machine as it rolled out 3 cans of Fizzy through the bright confines of its open door.
Just as Fizz put the last Fizzy into his pocket a well-dressed man called Fizzy over...
"Boy, Professor J would like to speak to you as well"
Fizz scurried up and followed the man through a hallway with many number doors before stopping at door #115
The man simply opened the door and left Fizz to enter alone...
Fizz moved in through the door and examined the surroundings. The room seemed to be decorated as an office and was covered in art and modern technology, or at least modern to what Fizz was used to. Daniel was accompanied by Slushi where they both sat in two wooden chairs at the end of a rather big table. on the other side of said table sat a tall man that wore a black tuxedo, he had cyan hair but you could hardly tell due to a black beanie he wore over it.
He stared at Fizz and tilted his head, which made Fizz feel uncomfortable...
"Now that I'm finished with you two" he groaned in a harsh deep dark voice.
He took off his beanie revealing his puffy curly cyan hair. He grinned a brighter smile and was pumped full of unending energy unlike his previous state seconds ago...
"This is OYKOT" he exclaimed "the underground city" Slamming his hands on the table he yelled "You will be trained by no other than Jel himself!", "You will grow and develop into a strong, intelligent, hardworking-"
"What if I refuse" Fizz interrupted
The man seemed to be disappointed in that answer...
"Refusing power is weak," he spoke slowly putting on his beanie, a dark aura emitted from his body that made Fizz feel small...
"I won't allow you to be weak Fin,"- he called out
After a near-death experience, certain people acquire the ability to transform into a variety of monsters, From a can of soda on top of a supernaturally strong body- to a
300-meter skeleton from the waist up capable of mass destruction- This is the story of Fizz, Daniel, and Sasha as they struggle to find meaning in their destructive nature.
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... (this is drafting for an entire novel; in other words, this is to receive feedback before i basically redo this but 10x better"
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