Fizz was guided to what appeared to be a wooden dojo surrounded by grass which was strange due to them being underground...
"home sweet home,"- professor j chuckled.
There was no door, but as he followed Mr. J towards the opening, he could see what appeared to be raw sunlight.
As he walked through the door, he could see and feel a warm endless field of grass...
He stepped onto the grass barefoot and took in his surroundings.
"is it magi-" Fizz started to ask but was cut off by a harsh right hook from Mr. J!
Fizz rolled down to the ground and groaned-
"W-what was that for" he mumbled.
Mr. J chuckled- "this is only training.", "if you can hit me once, ill take you and your friends to the movies."
Fizz slowly rose up to his feet- "Why would I want to go to the movies-" Fizz started before getting sucker punched by Mr. J so hard he had to take 4 steps back...
"I was trying to motivate you," Mr. J sighed... "how bout if you land a strike on me... You can go with Daniel and Slushi on the Sasha retrieval expedition."
"Sasha," Fizz thought suddenly- he was immediately filled with a tremendous feeling of power! He felt lighter than he ever did before!!!
Mr. J laughed as he noticed that he crushed the soda cans inside Fizz's pocket- "Did you wet your sel-" A sudden left hook from Fizz cut him off as he barely avoided it.
"They didn't tell me he was a mazoku,"- Professor J sighed as he hopped away from Fizz and stretched his legs!
Fizz felt like he did the first time he transformed but more "stable"...
"Im surprised you didn't fully transform into a level 5 mazoku,"- Mr. J spoke, genuinely impressed... "Most beginners would have wasted all of their energy to transform fully and then be unable to fight shortly after."
"I wasn't even thinking about transforming, though," Fizz thought... Clearly, his body hadn't changed visually, yet he felt as strong as he did when he had the soda can head.
"Heh, after I'm done beating the shit out of you- I'll teach you what a mazoku actually is," Professor J coughed as he pulled his beanie over his head.
Fizz could feel his potential threat from across the field.
Just as he was about to take his first step toward Mr. J- He suddenly found himself airborne just beneath the clouds- then the pain set in as he started to fall...
"Did- he punch me in that split instant," Fizz thought in disbelief as he started to hurl out red bodily fluids and flail his arms as he flew back down to the ground-
He saw Professor J looking up at him through the clouds-
"Lesson two," Fizz heard Professor J call out from underneath him.
After a near-death experience, certain people acquire the ability to transform into a variety of monsters, From a can of soda on top of a supernaturally strong body- to a
300-meter skeleton from the waist up capable of mass destruction- This is the story of Fizz, Daniel, and Sasha as they struggle to find meaning in their destructive nature.
Feel free to discuss what you think about the story so far and what i could do better as a writer!
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... (this is drafting for an entire novel; in other words, this is to receive feedback before i basically redo this but 10x better"
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